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The Never Ending Story (Commentary Thread)

donald.keller
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3/1/2014 2:49:00 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
This thread is for discussing the Never Ending Story Thread. (http://www.debate.org...)

If you want to post a chapter, check here first. Make sure that someone isn't posting a chapter already. If you see that someone is posting Chapter XII, but the most current chapter is Chapter XI, do NOT post.

If the most current chapter here is also the most current chapter in the story, it's safe to post here. Make sure to recheck this thread before clicking send.

If you want to post a comment, do so HERE. Do not interrupt the story to say something.
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3/1/2014 10:49:52 AM
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The existence of this thread is quite ambitious, considering the current state of the original thread.
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3/1/2014 12:18:28 PM
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At 3/1/2014 10:49:52 AM, Maikuru wrote:
The existence of this thread is quite ambitious, considering the current state of the original thread.

The point of this thread is mostly so that people can post that they are writing a chapter. Otherwise 3 different people might end up writing 3 different Chapter IIs at once.
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3/1/2014 3:28:01 PM
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I am posting!!!
(following the golden rule)
Chapter II: Somewhere on Planet Earth
Equestrian election
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This House would impose democracy
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Reign of Terror is unjustified
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Raise min. wage to $10.10
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3/1/2014 3:57:01 PM
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Try to keep all chapters at least a few thousand characters long. and use formatting.
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3/1/2014 4:01:39 PM
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Writing Chapter III: The Fires of Night.
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3/1/2014 4:29:26 PM
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Remember to use formatting and have spaces between paragraphs. Bold face the Chapter title, and never reference another writer or chapter. No breaking the fourth wall.

Also, think before naming something, would that name really be there? Neither Homo Sapiens or Jack are names you see when they were just recreating fire.
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3/1/2014 7:08:38 PM
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At 3/1/2014 5:51:44 PM, yay842 wrote:
kfc

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http://www.bitrebels.com...

The first one was the best. Why'd they make the princess black? I don't recall them ever explaining the sudden change of race...
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3/2/2014 12:15:57 PM
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Is anyone currently creating a chapter?
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3/2/2014 12:54:48 PM
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At 3/2/2014 12:15:57 PM, thedebatekid wrote:
Is anyone currently creating a chapter?

No.
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3/2/2014 8:39:42 PM
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At 3/2/2014 12:54:48 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 3/2/2014 12:15:57 PM, thedebatekid wrote:
Is anyone currently creating a chapter?

No.

I'd like to take the next one then.
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3/2/2014 8:51:10 PM
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Chapter IV: A Man Born of Gods
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3/2/2014 8:52:57 PM
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At 3/2/2014 8:51:10 PM, thedebatekid wrote:
Chapter IV: A Man Born of Gods

Remember to use spaces between paragraphs and format it some. And don't do what 9spaceking did u.u
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3/3/2014 11:06:49 AM
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At 3/2/2014 8:52:57 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 3/2/2014 8:51:10 PM, thedebatekid wrote:
Chapter IV: A Man Born of Gods

Remember to use spaces between paragraphs and format it some. And don't do what 9spaceking did u.u

Hows that?
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3/3/2014 1:37:26 PM
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At 3/3/2014 11:06:49 AM, thedebatekid wrote:
At 3/2/2014 8:52:57 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 3/2/2014 8:51:10 PM, thedebatekid wrote:
Chapter IV: A Man Born of Gods

Remember to use spaces between paragraphs and format it some. And don't do what 9spaceking did u.u

Hows that?

The title is the same format as the text. It can't be no more than a few 100 characters long. The guy didn't consider the time period when naming things, broke the 4th wall. Talked about the prior chapter. Literally..

"Did you know that the gods are actually quite boring? Try reading chapter one, it was written by them gods! Yes, that explains the monotonic sense."

And had no concern for the story after him. "But now--I am quite more exciting, known as the Do-A-Million-Things God"
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3/3/2014 5:25:28 PM
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At 3/3/2014 1:37:26 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 3/3/2014 11:06:49 AM, thedebatekid wrote:
At 3/2/2014 8:52:57 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 3/2/2014 8:51:10 PM, thedebatekid wrote:
Chapter IV: A Man Born of Gods

Remember to use spaces between paragraphs and format it some. And don't do what 9spaceking did u.u

Hows that?

The title is the same format as the text. It can't be no more than a few 100 characters long. The guy didn't consider the time period when naming things, broke the 4th wall. Talked about the prior chapter. Literally..

"Did you know that the gods are actually quite boring? Try reading chapter one, it was written by them gods! Yes, that explains the monotonic sense."

And had no concern for the story after him. "But now--I am quite more exciting, known as the Do-A-Million-Things God"

ok. is my chapter any good. Except for being a little long.
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3/3/2014 5:30:55 PM
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At 3/3/2014 5:25:28 PM, thedebatekid wrote:
At 3/3/2014 1:37:26 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 3/3/2014 11:06:49 AM, thedebatekid wrote:
At 3/2/2014 8:52:57 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 3/2/2014 8:51:10 PM, thedebatekid wrote:
Chapter IV: A Man Born of Gods

Remember to use spaces between paragraphs and format it some. And don't do what 9spaceking did u.u

Hows that?

The title is the same format as the text. It can't be no more than a few 100 characters long. The guy didn't consider the time period when naming things, broke the 4th wall. Talked about the prior chapter. Literally..

"Did you know that the gods are actually quite boring? Try reading chapter one, it was written by them gods! Yes, that explains the monotonic sense."

And had no concern for the story after him. "But now--I am quite more exciting, known as the Do-A-Million-Things God"

ok. is my chapter any good. Except for being a little long.

You did perfect for size and formatting :D
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3/3/2014 11:48:37 PM
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I want to write a chapter afterwards.
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3/4/2014 6:29:43 AM
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I call chapter 7!!!
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3/4/2014 7:35:35 AM
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At 3/4/2014 6:30:05 AM, Juan_Pablo wrote:
I'm now posting Chapter V: Jack's Dream.

Tell me what you think. ( This is my post-edit version. )

Well that was strange to say the least.
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3/4/2014 2:03:00 PM
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Chapter VI: The Midnight Journey.
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3/4/2014 4:28:30 PM
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At 3/4/2014 7:35:35 AM, thedebatekid wrote:
At 3/4/2014 6:30:05 AM, Juan_Pablo wrote:
I'm now posting Chapter V: Jack's Dream.

Tell me what you think. ( This is my post-edit version. )

Well that was strange to say the least.

Yeah, looking at it now I would change a few things, particularly the planet's dialogue.

"gentile" is suppose to read "gentle" in one of the paragraphs.

I should have allowed myself to work on it more, rather that post what I quickly finished and edited.
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3/4/2014 4:50:31 PM
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Chapter VII: An Enchantment At Mid-Day
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3/4/2014 8:11:41 PM
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At 3/4/2014 7:31:01 PM, Juan_Pablo wrote:
Donald and Debate, let's do a Star Wars fan-fiction story next, about a Jedi or smuggler.

Sure. But not in this one... This is a continuous story, it might change MC and plot a lot, but the story continues where the last one story.

We can so a The Never Ending Story (Star Wars) if this one works out.
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