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Sanfran
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5/1/2013 11:02:58 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
1 =

fish, why are you so slippery
tell me please
wait you cant talk
silly me
ill just eat you
ewwwww I forget to cook you

2 = roses are blue
violets are red
its opposite day

3= darkness all around me
thats why I'm scared
someone help
please
Sanfran
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5/1/2013 11:05:30 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
more I thinked of:

4 = the world is so big
i cant see most of it
thats why I dont see most of it
Im happy where I am

5= being happy means you arent sad
being sad means you arent happy
being happy is best
Oryus
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5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
crinack
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
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5/1/2013 11:08:10 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

thats a word
Sanfran
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5/1/2013 11:08:30 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:08:10 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

thats a word

i know the difference, dont try to think your good for writing a poem when u didnt
Skepsikyma
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5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*
"The Collectivist experiment is thoroughly suited (in appearance at least) to the Capitalist society which it proposes to replace. It works with the existing machinery of Capitalism, talks and thinks in the existing terms of Capitalism, appeals to just those appetites which Capitalism has aroused, and ridicules as fantastic and unheard-of just those things in society the memory of which Capitalism has killed among men wherever the blight of it has spread."
- Hilaire Belloc -
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5/1/2013 11:11:11 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
more i thought =

letters all around, i see them, they are colorful
my classroom is fun, because we play games
games are fun

being nice is best
being mean is not okay
thats what my teacher told me
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5/1/2013 11:11:39 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*

it wasnt supposed to be a poem that was called a word
Oryus
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5/1/2013 11:12:38 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:11:39 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*

it wasnt supposed to be a poem that was called a word

You're just not artsy enough to understand.
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
Sanfran
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5/1/2013 11:13:23 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:12:38 PM, Oryus wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:11:39 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*

it wasnt supposed to be a poem that was called a word

You're just not artsy enough to understand.

i paint pictures a lot
Sanfran
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5/1/2013 11:13:47 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:13:23 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:12:38 PM, Oryus wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:11:39 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*

it wasnt supposed to be a poem that was called a word

You're just not artsy enough to understand.

i paint pictures a lot

therfore, your wrong.
Skepsikyma
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5/1/2013 11:15:33 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:11:39 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*

it wasnt supposed to be a poem that was called a word

I see it as a commentary on the futility of linguistic communication, on the stifling isolation of the modern man, and of his soul-crushing alienation from nature and other people. Crinack is the wall between our understanding and our intuition, it is the wild virtue lost in stifling, rigid forms of communication. It is the wall on which every poet beats, sometimes for an entire lifetime, in the hopes of opening one small crack. Crinack is not a poem. It is the poem.
"The Collectivist experiment is thoroughly suited (in appearance at least) to the Capitalist society which it proposes to replace. It works with the existing machinery of Capitalism, talks and thinks in the existing terms of Capitalism, appeals to just those appetites which Capitalism has aroused, and ridicules as fantastic and unheard-of just those things in society the memory of which Capitalism has killed among men wherever the blight of it has spread."
- Hilaire Belloc -
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5/1/2013 11:17:12 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:15:33 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:11:39 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*

it wasnt supposed to be a poem that was called a word

I see it as a commentary on the futility of linguistic communication, on the stifling isolation of the modern man, and of his soul-crushing alienation from nature and other people. Crinack is the wall between our understanding and our intuition, it is the wild virtue lost in stifling, rigid forms of communication. It is the wall on which every poet beats, sometimes for an entire lifetime, in the hopes of opening one small crack. Crinack is not a poem. It is the poem.

your stupid and crazy.
Oryus
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5/1/2013 11:20:17 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:15:33 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:11:39 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*

it wasnt supposed to be a poem that was called a word

I see it as a commentary on the futility of linguistic communication, on the stifling isolation of the modern man, and of his soul-crushing alienation from nature and other people. Crinack is the wall between our understanding and our intuition, it is the wild virtue lost in stifling, rigid forms of communication. It is the wall on which every poet beats, sometimes for an entire lifetime, in the hopes of opening one small crack. Crinack is not a poem. It is the poem.

f'ing sigged. I died.
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
Sanfran
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5/1/2013 11:23:27 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:20:17 PM, Oryus wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:15:33 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:11:39 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*

it wasnt supposed to be a poem that was called a word

I see it as a commentary on the futility of linguistic communication, on the stifling isolation of the modern man, and of his soul-crushing alienation from nature and other people. Crinack is the wall between our understanding and our intuition, it is the wild virtue lost in stifling, rigid forms of communication. It is the wall on which every poet beats, sometimes for an entire lifetime, in the hopes of opening one small crack. Crinack is not a poem. It is the poem.

f'ing sigged. I died.

i sort of like this poem. but not as good as mine
Sanfran
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5/1/2013 11:27:43 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:23:27 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:20:17 PM, Oryus wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:15:33 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:11:39 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:10:36 PM, Skepsikyma wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:07:57 PM, Sanfran wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:06:54 PM, Oryus wrote:
crinack

thats not a poem

That's the greatest poem ever written, for your information.

Brilliant, simply brilliant *applause*

it wasnt supposed to be a poem that was called a word

I see it as a commentary on the futility of linguistic communication, on the stifling isolation of the modern man, and of his soul-crushing alienation from nature and other people. Crinack is the wall between our understanding and our intuition, it is the wild virtue lost in stifling, rigid forms of communication. It is the wall on which every poet beats, sometimes for an entire lifetime, in the hopes of opening one small crack. Crinack is not a poem. It is the poem.

f'ing sigged. I died.

i sort of like this poem. but not as good as mine

what are you going to name it. can i help
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5/1/2013 11:30:49 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:02:58 PM, Sanfran wrote:
1 =

fish, why are you so slippery
tell me please
wait you cant talk
silly me
ill just eat you
ewwwww I forget to cook you



2 = roses are blue
violets are red
its opposite day


3= darkness all around me
thats why I'm scared
someone help
please

Please make an entire poetry book I would buy that shitt up in like 2 seconds
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5/1/2013 11:37:24 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:30:49 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 5/1/2013 11:02:58 PM, Sanfran wrote:
1 =

fish, why are you so slippery
tell me please
wait you cant talk
silly me
ill just eat you
ewwwww I forget to cook you



2 = roses are blue
violets are red
its opposite day


3= darkness all around me
thats why I'm scared
someone help
please

Please make an entire poetry book I would buy that shitt up in like 2 seconds

A whole book! Thats like as big as the dictionary
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5/2/2013 7:28:35 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
other poems i thought of :

1= some days im cranky
some days im happy
some days im inbetween

2= the funnest days
are
the
days
with
friends

3= colors colors i see them
red
blue
yellow
whats next
pozessed
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5/2/2013 11:57:27 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
Dick, wang, johnson, jimmy.

Bj, oral, deep throat, hummer.

Coochie, snatch, cooter, box.

Anal, backdoor, caboose, glory hole.

Laid, sex, bang, f--k

My poem is the best. I win.
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7/28/2014 8:50:07 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:02:58 PM, Sanfran wrote:
1 =

fish, why are you so slippery
tell me please
wait you cant talk
silly me
ill just eat you
ewwwww I forget to cook you



2 = roses are blue
violets are red
its opposite day


3= darkness all around me
thats why I'm scared
someone help
please
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7/28/2014 8:59:56 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:02:58 PM, Sanfran wrote:
1 =

fish, why are you so slippery
tell me please
wait you cant talk
silly me
ill just eat you
ewwwww I forget to cook you



2 = roses are blue
violets are red
its opposite day


3= darkness all around me
thats why I'm scared
someone help
please
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7/28/2014 9:16:04 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 5/1/2013 11:02:58 PM, Sanfran wrote:
1 =

fish, why are you so slippery
tell me please
wait you cant talk
silly me
ill just eat you
ewwwww I forget to cook you



2 = roses are blue
violets are red
its opposite day


3= darkness all around me
thats why I'm scared
someone help
please
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