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ESocialBookworm
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6/4/2014 3:28:00 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
"Sometimes before it gets better
The darkness gets bigger
The person that you"d take a bullet for is behind the trigger"

I'm not sure who originally said this but my friend, DauntlessWarrior, told me it when I was upset once.

Thoughts?
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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6/4/2014 3:35:28 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 3:28:00 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
"Sometimes before it gets better
The darkness gets bigger
The person that you"d take a bullet for is behind the trigger"

I'm not sure who originally said this but my friend, DauntlessWarrior, told me it when I was upset once.

Thoughts?

That poem is deep. Makes you stop and think for a moment.
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"If you are going through hell, keep going." "Sir Winston Churchill

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lannan13
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6/4/2014 3:38:57 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
I too have a short poem.

Look at all these things I take everyday,
Feel as if I could just fade away,
In so numb inside,
Why won't this pain subside?
Becoming less,
Overcome by my helplessness.
I find it appealing,
That my wounds aren't healing,

And

So many things I cannot take,
All these things are adding wait,
So soon I'll brake.
All these things in my mind,
Are causing me to go blind.
Feel as if I'm losing my soul,
Falling down a rabit hole,
Loosing my soul.
Escape the hate,
Escape the fate.
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If the sky's the limit then why do we have footprints on the Moon? I'm shooting my aspirations for the stars.

"If you are going through hell, keep going." "Sir Winston Churchill

"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." "Eleanor Roosevelt

Topics I want to debate. (http://tinyurl.com...)
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ESocialBookworm
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6/4/2014 4:01:10 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 3:38:57 PM, lannan13 wrote:
I too have a short poem.

Look at all these things I take everyday,
Feel as if I could just fade away,
In so numb inside,
Why won't this pain subside?
Becoming less,
Overcome by my helplessness.
I find it appealing,
That my wounds aren't healing,

And

So many things I cannot take,
All these things are adding wait,
So soon I'll brake.
All these things in my mind,
Are causing me to go blind.
Feel as if I'm losing my soul,
Falling down a rabit hole,
Loosing my soul.
Escape the hate,
Escape the fate.

Lovely. That one is also deep and beautiful.
You're a great poet lannan!
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
lannan13
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6/4/2014 4:03:10 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 4:01:10 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 6/4/2014 3:38:57 PM, lannan13 wrote:
I too have a short poem.

Look at all these things I take everyday,
Feel as if I could just fade away,
In so numb inside,
Why won't this pain subside?
Becoming less,
Overcome by my helplessness.
I find it appealing,
That my wounds aren't healing,

And

So many things I cannot take,
All these things are adding wait,
So soon I'll brake.
All these things in my mind,
Are causing me to go blind.
Feel as if I'm losing my soul,
Falling down a rabit hole,
Loosing my soul.
Escape the hate,
Escape the fate.

Lovely. That one is also deep and beautiful.
You're a great poet lannan!

Thanks! Though I really don't concider myself a poet though I ended up getting a few of my poems into my Schools Art/Poetry magazine (Mandala). I do wish to hear what these poems mean to you.
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If the sky's the limit then why do we have footprints on the Moon? I'm shooting my aspirations for the stars.

"If you are going through hell, keep going." "Sir Winston Churchill

"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." "Eleanor Roosevelt

Topics I want to debate. (http://tinyurl.com...)
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thett3
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6/4/2014 4:06:08 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
My poem:

This is a sentence
This is also a sentence
This is a sentence
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#StandwithBossy

#UnbanTheMadman

#BetOnThett

"Don't quote me, ever." -Max

"My name is max. I'm not a big fan of slacks"- Max rapping

"Walmart should have the opportunity to bribe a politician to it's agenda" -Max

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: At 11/12/2016 11:49:40 PM, Raisor wrote:
: thett was right
ESocialBookworm
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6/4/2014 4:08:03 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Books and poems have a way of touching my heart. Some people are great writers, and words flow out of them like a fish through water. These people have the ability to grip your heart with their pieces.

Short, soft poem, like these, evoke a calming, peaceful mood in me. It's kind of like being at the beach when there's a storm but you can't hear. You see the aggressive waves but everything is just quiet.

As chaos reigns, everything is quiet and just becomes peaceful and all you can hear is your breathing.
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
ESocialBookworm
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6/4/2014 4:08:51 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 4:06:08 PM, thett3 wrote:
My poem:

This is a sentence
This is also a sentence
This is a sentence

XD Thett you never cease to crack me up.

BTW, you might wanna read my next episode, I've got a surprise for you. I'll post it Saturday
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
thett3
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6/4/2014 4:09:50 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 4:08:51 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 6/4/2014 4:06:08 PM, thett3 wrote:
My poem:

This is a sentence
This is also a sentence
This is a sentence

XD Thett you never cease to crack me up.

BTW, you might wanna read my next episode, I've got a surprise for you. I'll post it Saturday

okay will do.

I'm just gonna leave this here... http://www.debate.org...
DDO Vice President

#StandwithBossy

#UnbanTheMadman

#BetOnThett

"Don't quote me, ever." -Max

"My name is max. I'm not a big fan of slacks"- Max rapping

"Walmart should have the opportunity to bribe a politician to it's agenda" -Max

"Thett, you're really good at convincing people you're a decent person"-tulle

"You fit the character of Regina George quite nicely"- Sam

: At 11/12/2016 11:49:40 PM, Raisor wrote:
: thett was right
ESocialBookworm
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6/4/2014 4:10:05 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
@lannan see above
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
lannan13
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6/4/2014 4:11:51 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 4:09:50 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 6/4/2014 4:08:51 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 6/4/2014 4:06:08 PM, thett3 wrote:
My poem:

This is a sentence
This is also a sentence
This is a sentence

XD Thett you never cease to crack me up.

BTW, you might wanna read my next episode, I've got a surprise for you. I'll post it Saturday

okay will do.

I'm just gonna leave this here... http://www.debate.org...

Very, Very interested. I can't debate until after the 15th though.
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If the sky's the limit then why do we have footprints on the Moon? I'm shooting my aspirations for the stars.

"If you are going through hell, keep going." "Sir Winston Churchill

"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." "Eleanor Roosevelt

Topics I want to debate. (http://tinyurl.com...)
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ESocialBookworm
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6/4/2014 4:22:20 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 4:09:50 PM, thett3 wrote:
At 6/4/2014 4:08:51 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 6/4/2014 4:06:08 PM, thett3 wrote:
My poem:

This is a sentence
This is also a sentence
This is a sentence

XD Thett you never cease to crack me up.

BTW, you might wanna read my next episode, I've got a surprise for you. I'll post it Saturday

okay will do.

I'm just gonna leave this here... http://www.debate.org...

If no one takes it by Friday, I'm up for it.
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
lannan13
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6/4/2014 4:22:56 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 4:10:05 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
@lannan see above

Which one?
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If the sky's the limit then why do we have footprints on the Moon? I'm shooting my aspirations for the stars.

"If you are going through hell, keep going." "Sir Winston Churchill

"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." "Eleanor Roosevelt

Topics I want to debate. (http://tinyurl.com...)
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ESocialBookworm
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6/4/2014 4:23:30 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 4:22:56 PM, lannan13 wrote:
At 6/4/2014 4:10:05 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
@lannan see above

Which one?

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Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
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6/4/2014 6:55:54 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 3:38:57 PM, lannan13 wrote:
I too have a short poem.

Look at all these things I take everyday,
Feel as if I could just fade away,
In so numb inside,
Why won't this pain subside?
Becoming less,
Overcome by my helplessness.
I find it appealing,
That my wounds aren't healing,

And

So many things I cannot take,
All these things are adding wait,
So soon I'll brake.
All these things in my mind,
Are causing me to go blind.
Feel as if I'm losing my soul,
Falling down a rabit hole,
Loosing my soul.
Escape the hate,
Escape the fate.

these remind of deathmetal or hard rock for some reason
Epsilon: There are so many stories where some brave hero decides to give their life to save the day, and because of their sacrifice, the good guys win, the survivors all cheer, and everybody lives happily ever after. But the hero... never gets to see that ending. They'll never know if their sacrifice actually made a difference. They'll never know if the day was really saved. In the end, they just have to have faith.
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6/4/2014 7:03:41 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 3:38:57 PM, lannan13 wrote:
I too have a short poem.

Look at all these things I take everyday,
Feel as if I could just fade away,
In so numb inside,
Why won't this pain subside?
Becoming less,
Overcome by my helplessness.
I find it appealing,
That my wounds aren't healing,

And

So many things I cannot take,
All these things are adding wait,
So soon I'll brake.
All these things in my mind,
Are causing me to go blind.
Feel as if I'm losing my soul,
Falling down a rabit hole,
Loosing my soul.
Escape the hate,
Escape the fate.

These are really good poems!
How come when I hit review it sometimes adds my post without me clicking add post?
Does this happen to other people?

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Learn to use emoticons DDO.
lannan13
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6/5/2014 5:15:43 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 6:55:54 PM, cybertron1998 wrote:
At 6/4/2014 3:38:57 PM, lannan13 wrote:
I too have a short poem.

Look at all these things I take everyday,
Feel as if I could just fade away,
In so numb inside,
Why won't this pain subside?
Becoming less,
Overcome by my helplessness.
I find it appealing,
That my wounds aren't healing,

And

So many things I cannot take,
All these things are adding wait,
So soon I'll brake.
All these things in my mind,
Are causing me to go blind.
Feel as if I'm losing my soul,
Falling down a rabit hole,
Loosing my soul.
Escape the hate,
Escape the fate.

these remind of deathmetal or hard rock for some reason

Interesting, I always thought them to be alternative if any genre of music.
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If the sky's the limit then why do we have footprints on the Moon? I'm shooting my aspirations for the stars.

"If you are going through hell, keep going." "Sir Winston Churchill

"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." "Eleanor Roosevelt

Topics I want to debate. (http://tinyurl.com...)
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ESocialBookworm
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6/5/2014 7:30:55 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/5/2014 5:15:43 AM, lannan13 wrote:
At 6/4/2014 6:55:54 PM, cybertron1998 wrote:
At 6/4/2014 3:38:57 PM, lannan13 wrote:
I too have a short poem.

Look at all these things I take everyday,
Feel as if I could just fade away,
In so numb inside,
Why won't this pain subside?
Becoming less,
Overcome by my helplessness.
I find it appealing,
That my wounds aren't healing,

And

So many things I cannot take,
All these things are adding wait,
Is this supposed to be "weight" or "wait" btw?
So soon I'll brake.
All these things in my mind,
Are causing me to go blind.
Feel as if I'm losing my soul,
Falling down a rabit hole,
Loosing my soul.
Escape the hate,
Escape the fate.

these remind of deathmetal or hard rock for some reason

Interesting, I always thought them to be alternative if any genre of music.
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
cybertron1998
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6/5/2014 10:59:53 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/5/2014 5:15:43 AM, lannan13 wrote:
At 6/4/2014 6:55:54 PM, cybertron1998 wrote:
At 6/4/2014 3:38:57 PM, lannan13 wrote:
I too have a short poem.

Look at all these things I take everyday,
Feel as if I could just fade away,
In so numb inside,
Why won't this pain subside?
Becoming less,
Overcome by my helplessness.
I find it appealing,
That my wounds aren't healing,

And

So many things I cannot take,
All these things are adding wait,
So soon I'll brake.
All these things in my mind,
Are causing me to go blind.
Feel as if I'm losing my soul,
Falling down a rabit hole,
Loosing my soul.
Escape the hate,
Escape the fate.

these remind of deathmetal or hard rock for some reason

Interesting, I always thought them to be alternative if any genre of music.

they reminded me of the lyric of sudden death by megadeth
Epsilon: There are so many stories where some brave hero decides to give their life to save the day, and because of their sacrifice, the good guys win, the survivors all cheer, and everybody lives happily ever after. But the hero... never gets to see that ending. They'll never know if their sacrifice actually made a difference. They'll never know if the day was really saved. In the end, they just have to have faith.
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6/5/2014 3:48:39 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/4/2014 3:28:00 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
"Sometimes before it gets better
The darkness gets bigger
The person that you"d take a bullet for is behind the trigger"

I'm not sure who originally said this but my friend, DauntlessWarrior, told me it when I was upset once.

Thoughts?

Pretty interesting stuff right here... I think it means:
You are your own worst enemy and that until you learn to love yourself things will never get better.
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6/5/2014 4:11:10 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/5/2014 3:48:39 PM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 6/4/2014 3:28:00 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
"Sometimes before it gets better
The darkness gets bigger
The person that you"d take a bullet for is behind the trigger"

I'm not sure who originally said this but my friend, DauntlessWarrior, told me it when I was upset once.

Thoughts?

Pretty interesting stuff right here... I think it means:
You are your own worst enemy and that until you learn to love yourself things will never get better.

Interesting inference.

IMO, my first thought was that it meant that although sometimes you want to try to turn a situation around, it doesn't work out. "It usually gets worse before it gets better." (<< I think I said that wrong...)
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.