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Blade-of-Truth
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8/1/2014 4:12:49 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
Just post your rap in the form of a comment, let's see if we can keep this going.

16 bar minimum. Last rap wins. Lets go.
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Good gracious, look at this audacious patient
Chained in the basement his wife asks where his face went
open statement, lawyer on the case, time aint wasted
If I'm the chef then he's the duck who's about to get basted

Turn up the oven and fry this chump in a pan
bake the muffin and sell him off like a gram
I'm a concrete wall, your bullets I withstand
I'll part you quicker than you can hold water in your hand

Check the reaction, this kid can't even fathom his own detraction
committing infractions, without a drop of hope left in the bastion
hopeless passion, dopeless and stuck with a cobra's compassion
never-be-lasting, I strike quick and never mourn for my ration

Focus my attention, locusts choking on your pension
struggling for a dime when I'm creating new dimensions while in detention
young god, check it as I bust out ascension at my new convention
I stay getting air-time, while you don't even get a mention.
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Mikal
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8/1/2014 4:26:55 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
Focus my attention, locusts choking on your pension
struggling for a dime when I'm creating new dimensions while in detention
young god, check it as I bust out ascension at my new convention
I stay getting air-time, while you don't even get a mention.

There's just to much tension, its that calm before the descension
Now I'm just sitting here in apprehension, trying to come up with a new invention
My advice is to learn some comprehension, suicide watch that is labeled prevention
The power I possess is retention, I just extended your death call it an extension

So now lets break down what is real, It's only real if you can actually feel
So does that mean that I should steal, I don't want to take his last meal
That comes with having sex appeal, people just tend to kneel
Hell they even like to feel, Mushroom stamp it and call it a seal

I just spit raps and I never get bored, so taste the steel from my sword
If rhymes were currency mine you could not afford, you can even say they're adored
Now i'm feeling restored, Like Rick Grimes popping bullets in that zombie hoard
If you want a ticket for the hype train hop on board, just refer to me as lord
9spaceking
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8/1/2014 7:24:39 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
I don't even have to have 16 lines,
I don't even have to rhyme
I don't even have to near-rhyme
All I require is awesome rhythm
Breakin' the original laws of rap
Since the beginning of time
When it was invented
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Truth_seeker
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8/2/2014 11:12:08 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/1/2014 7:24:39 AM, 9spaceking wrote:
I don't even have to have 16 lines,
I don't even have to rhyme
I don't even have to near-rhyme
All I require is awesome rhythm
Breakin' the original laws of rap
Since the beginning of time
When it was invented

If you don't have to rhyme, don't waste our time!
You can't hang with artistic people like our kind!
You keep using the same word more than 1 line
When you wrote this, what were you?! Blind?!
You suck, only reason you rap is cuz it looks cool
When i battle you, you carelessly break hip-hop's rule
Your raps are weak, uneducated, and aren't solid
being an artist for you is strongly not encouraged
I can go on and on in rap being creatively explosive
You just devolve into a rap zombie as your erosive
You have no style, no flow, no bars, no raps n' no talent
It's common sense, don't need a judge to drop the mallet
Kid's mind is so weak, you need to go back to kindergarten!
That's why i'm going easy on you, cuz your not a spartan!
You a corny rapper trying to blend in with the crowd
I can honestly say that your rep. has been disemboweled
Oryus
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8/4/2014 10:38:10 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
Just was stumbling on this thread and I hate to burst your bubbles, yo.
You just bumbling pinheads? Or The Gathering of the Juggalos?
I'm the humbling coed and bring the fight. Lookin for trouble so
keep mumbling misled. I'll spit it tight and on the double. Pro.

Your raps are simplistic. I'm the composition appraiser.
You beat your chests with fists and I cut you down. Occam's razor.
I'm elite: the top pick. This rap game's clown-hazer.
I meet the stars like Star Trek. "Stun" is how I set my phaser.

Publish it out: Printing House Beast. I'm a worker of the crowd. See?
I'm mafia and make the town flee. Lay you out like Rhonda Rousey.
Make you pout and try to pounce me but I'm stout and you're too lousy.
Victory's not what surrounds thee. On my head is where the crown be.

Foe d*ck? Block it. Ya'lls sh*t? Mock it.
Pro spits on it totes laconic.
So sardonic. Flow bubonic.
Most sick: Tonic. Dope chick: Chronic.
Talk it toxic. Rock it sonic.
Jot it flawless: Goddess. Got it?
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
Blade-of-Truth
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8/4/2014 11:50:17 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/4/2014 10:38:10 AM, Oryus wrote:
Just was stumbling on this thread and I hate to burst your bubbles, yo.
You just bumbling pinheads? Or The Gathering of the Juggalos?
I'm the humbling coed and bring the fight. Lookin for trouble so
keep mumbling misled. I'll spit it tight and on the double. Pro.

Your raps are simplistic. I'm the composition appraiser.
You beat your chests with fists and I cut you down. Occam's razor.
I'm elite: the top pick. This rap game's clown-hazer.
I meet the stars like Star Trek. "Stun" is how I set my phaser.

Publish it out: Printing House Beast. I'm a worker of the crowd. See?
I'm mafia and make the town flee. Lay you out like Rhonda Rousey.
Make you pout and try to pounce me but I'm stout and you're too lousy.
Victory's not what surrounds thee. On my head is where the crown be.

Foe d*ck? Block it. Ya'lls sh*t? Mock it.
Pro spits on it totes laconic.
So sardonic. Flow bubonic.
Most sick: Tonic. Dope chick: Chronic.
Talk it toxic. Rock it sonic.
Jot it flawless: Goddess. Got it?

#Damn, Oryus went into beast mode! That was really good.
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8/4/2014 11:58:14 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/4/2014 11:50:17 AM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:38:10 AM, Oryus wrote:
Just was stumbling on this thread and I hate to burst your bubbles, yo.
You just bumbling pinheads? Or The Gathering of the Juggalos?
I'm the humbling coed and bring the fight. Lookin for trouble so
keep mumbling misled. I'll spit it tight and on the double. Pro.

Your raps are simplistic. I'm the composition appraiser.
You beat your chests with fists and I cut you down. Occam's razor.
I'm elite: the top pick. This rap game's clown-hazer.
I meet the stars like Star Trek. "Stun" is how I set my phaser.

Publish it out: Printing House Beast. I'm a worker of the crowd. See?
I'm mafia and make the town flee. Lay you out like Rhonda Rousey.
Make you pout and try to pounce me but I'm stout and you're too lousy.
Victory's not what surrounds thee. On my head is where the crown be.

Foe d*ck? Block it. Ya'lls sh*t? Mock it.
Pro spits on it totes laconic.
So sardonic. Flow bubonic.
Most sick: Tonic. Dope chick: Chronic.
Talk it toxic. Rock it sonic.
Jot it flawless: Goddess. Got it?

#Damn, Oryus went into beast mode! That was really good.

lol that was nice, can we only go once?
Oryus
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8/4/2014 12:03:40 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/4/2014 11:50:17 AM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:38:10 AM, Oryus wrote:
Just was stumbling on this thread and I hate to burst your bubbles, yo.
You just bumbling pinheads? Or The Gathering of the Juggalos?
I'm the humbling coed and bring the fight. Lookin for trouble so
keep mumbling misled. I'll spit it tight and on the double. Pro.

Your raps are simplistic. I'm the composition appraiser.
You beat your chests with fists and I cut you down. Occam's razor.
I'm elite: the top pick. This rap game's clown-hazer.
I meet the stars like Star Trek. "Stun" is how I set my phaser.

Publish it out: Printing House Beast. I'm a worker of the crowd. See?
I'm mafia and make the town flee. Lay you out like Rhonda Rousey.
Make you pout and try to pounce me but I'm stout and you're too lousy.
Victory's not what surrounds thee. On my head is where the crown be.

Foe d*ck? Block it. Ya'lls sh*t? Mock it.
Pro spits on it totes laconic.
So sardonic. Flow bubonic.
Most sick: Tonic. Dope chick: Chronic.
Talk it toxic. Rock it sonic.
Jot it flawless: Goddess. Got it?

#Damn, Oryus went into beast mode! That was really good.

LOL

Thanks, guys! You "got it" then. XD
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
Oryus
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8/4/2014 12:17:01 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
lol sh*t just got real XD

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: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
Blade-of-Truth
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8/4/2014 12:18:50 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/4/2014 11:58:14 AM, Truth_seeker wrote:
At 8/4/2014 11:50:17 AM, Blade-of-Truth wrote:
At 8/4/2014 10:38:10 AM, Oryus wrote:
Just was stumbling on this thread and I hate to burst your bubbles, yo.
You just bumbling pinheads? Or The Gathering of the Juggalos?
I'm the humbling coed and bring the fight. Lookin for trouble so
keep mumbling misled. I'll spit it tight and on the double. Pro.

Your raps are simplistic. I'm the composition appraiser.
You beat your chests with fists and I cut you down. Occam's razor.
I'm elite: the top pick. This rap game's clown-hazer.
I meet the stars like Star Trek. "Stun" is how I set my phaser.

Publish it out: Printing House Beast. I'm a worker of the crowd. See?
I'm mafia and make the town flee. Lay you out like Rhonda Rousey.
Make you pout and try to pounce me but I'm stout and you're too lousy.
Victory's not what surrounds thee. On my head is where the crown be.

Foe d*ck? Block it. Ya'lls sh*t? Mock it.
Pro spits on it totes laconic.
So sardonic. Flow bubonic.
Most sick: Tonic. Dope chick: Chronic.
Talk it toxic. Rock it sonic.
Jot it flawless: Goddess. Got it?

#Damn, Oryus went into beast mode! That was really good.

lol that was nice, can we only go once?

Naw, you can post as much as you want. I'm gonna post again but first I need to finish my battle with Spaceking.
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8/4/2014 12:19:41 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/4/2014 12:17:01 PM, Oryus wrote:
lol sh*t just got real XD

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O, I'm so following this!!
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8/5/2014 8:00:30 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
I haven't wrote anything in forever so for now

Out from the background His Orangeness is here
Ain't been on in a year, left this site in the rear
Thank god my peers heard, what y'all couldn't hear
I been had them scared, they should call me Agent Fear
Or Agent War waging war in the streets
Throwing blows in the game like Metta World Peace
They been calling me crazy
Your chick been calling me lately
I'm getting rid of your fans like you just got AC

Homie I'm not with that
Start beef then fix that
You mad cause they eat up my bars like kit kats
You can't catch up to or come near me
Over staying is overcast
I'll tell rappers when its dreary
On bars I'm over the top like good tap beers be
I got women clearly, you got iPhone, Siri

Semantic menace,Ebonics articulated
Often use big words to leave dumb rappers frustrated
Yes indeed! My vocab heavy
Have you bitchy and cramped cause my flow that heavy
You got toxic shock on mics,You're used Maxi's.
No felonies but the streets loving my rap sheets

No swear words either. Boom.
#BlackLivesMatter
Oryus
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8/8/2014 1:08:46 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/7/2014 12:10:05 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
So does this mean I win?

haha I don't think so. People will post more. But yours was great. I lol'd Probably my favorite I've seen of yours.
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
Oryus
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8/8/2014 1:09:59 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/7/2014 12:10:05 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
So does this mean I win?

The bit about siri and your flow being heavy XD

love it.
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
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8/9/2014 5:39:43 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 8/8/2014 1:09:59 PM, Oryus wrote:
At 8/7/2014 12:10:05 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
So does this mean I win?

The bit about siri and your flow being heavy XD

love it.

Lol thanks. That means a lot from you
#BlackLivesMatter
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8/10/2014 9:28:34 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Here on in is a hero with(in)
free from the stench of corruption and sin
a hero is one with a heart of pure love
that strengthens not withers as he grows above
a hero is one who shows others the way
back to the land of the living they say
our hero is missing your hero is gone
who now has the courage to carry us on
there are no more hero's
there are only men
learning the lessons
again, and again
-MCXI
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8/12/2014 9:37:03 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
When Rors gets involved you best get to steppin.
I'm Killing deez rhymes with bars being my weapon.
Hotel of Rap you're welcome to step in,
Though if you mess with me I'll send you to heaven.
In a Thread like this I don't even feel threatened.
Me losing this contest is out of the question.
Based on my lyrical expression and rap obsession .
There's no second guessin' you Will know that I am Legend

Alright kiddos, Time to learn your origins, it'll be tough.
See I beedrillin' your mom, cuz her hubby's D wasn't enough.
The Sex scene was shocking after I zapdos pants off her - Long story short I squirtled in her jigglypuff.

See when I get in this rapping mood, you all are screwed.
My mind is renewed, which is obvious from the bars I exude.
I'm a rap monster, MCs being my food, evident in the battles I pursued.
I can't stop til' my opposition's subdued. With all this drive, double check your plan to elude.
MCXI
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8/13/2014 10:30:46 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
As corporations kill each other
trying to succeed
in the name of profit, wealth, and greed
is reasons why
your minds eye will bleed
peace on Earth
when will we see
when this ends
humanities free
so I say,
life is what you make it
so read between the lines
as the government prints more money
takes over the corrupted minds
slave to the dollar bill
no wonder why we rob and kill
so we all go to war
and the poor get kicked out the door
as the politicians laugh into the night
-MCXI