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4/30/2015 4:51:00 PM
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Level XXIV: Truest Intentions

Game Update 5.6: "8-05-2027. The addition of new spells, including the Purest Light and Final Flare spells. The King Dragon update is in production."

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"Vicksan..." Bsh tried talking to him.
"What did he mean 'sacrifice'?" Vicksan asked. He stepped back away from everyone.
"Vicksan, please..." Godmother looked at Whiteflame, "What did you mean sacrifice?"
"If I had a dictionary, I'd throw it at you." Whiteflame looked over at Vicksan. "Just think... At least Bsh tried convincing you to find another way."
Vicksan looked at Bsh and Vox. "What did he mean? What aren't you telling me?"

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MIDNIGHT
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Warem wondered the hall in search of Bookworm. He hadn't seen her in nearly a day.
"Oh..?" He came across his bedroom door. It was opened.
Warem entered his room, sword ready. But no one was inside. He begin looking around for hints that anything had been stolen. Everything looked untouched, however.
The room was mostly a mess. Clothes and books laying around the bed and the desk he didn't use. The chair at the desk was turned apart and cut up... It made for great sword training.

"Warem?" someone called from behind.
"What?" Warem turned back to see Rev.
"I need some help with something." Rev answered.
"About time."
"What do you mean?" Rev was confused.
"Well you've been up to something for a while now. It was about time you asked someone to help." Warem walked up. "Were you in my room earlier?"
"No?"
"Hm... Okay. So what is it?" Warem waited.
"Oh... It's... You know how AI work, right? You have the Object and the AI?" Rev begin.
"Ya... And the AI attaches to the object's AI.var variable. I'm aware. I've been playing a long time." Warem waited to hear what Rev was getting at.
"Right. And you can move around AIs... It's how you swap the minds of a cat and a bear... Or a player and a bot." Rev continued. "Well... What if you die... And you don't get deleted... One could, I guess, create a body and transfer your mind to it."
"Rev. What are you getting at here?" Warem was curious.
"... I want to bring back Paramix."

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VALLEY
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Mekaiel observed the goblin army from a distance. He was interested in it's design... Goblin armies are a complicated conglomerate of AI, and it's unpredictable just how they might react when in such vast numbers.

A goblin came up from under him. He looked down from his tree at the creature wondering beneath... It hadn't noticed him.
"Interesting..." Mekaiel jumped done cut his blade through it... The goblin was dead on impact.
He wanted to see the creature up close... It was a deep blue color. With disproportionately large white and yellow eyes... It had randomly laid out facial hair, and it's skin was covered in moles and dirt. It's sharp teeth was crooked and rotten.
The creature had a bow with at least a hundred arrows. It's leather tunic was tied in front and had hay under it to thicken the outfit and keep the Goblin warm. Mekaiel didn't see much more by the time the creature turned to a cloud of experience, and fading into Mekaiel's body.

"Hm..." Mekaiel went back to his tree, only to be stopped by a loud roaring noise. He turned back to see an army, a hundred strong, roaming a hill near the Goblin camp. They begin to retreat, pursued by at least ten thousand Goblins. If the Goblins were smarter, they'd see it was a trap.
"Stupid goblins." Mekaiel turned back to head to Kroengard.

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KROENGARD
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"Vicksan." Vox stepped up. "The ring. It converts health into mana or strength..." Vicksan just waited. "That ring was needed because it only has two settings... No health conversion, or full health conversion. You'll need a full health conversion for the plan to work."
"... What?" Vicksan stepped further away. "Full... Health...? I have to give up all my health..."
"But that'll kill him!" Godmother yelled.
"Yes. It will." Vox turned to her. His eyes gave away his lack of concern.
"I'm sorry..." Bsh didn't know what to say.
"Vicksan. You need to continue your training. Only a day remains." Vox turned back to him.
"No!" Vicksan yelled.

Everyone stopped to stare at him.
"I'm not dying for this... They back stabbed me... And they exiled me... And they hated me... I'm not dying for them!" He was almost crying... Everyone had planned to have him kill himself...
"You won't let seventeen thousand people die to save yourself." Vox replied.
"Why wouldn't I? You would." Vicksan replied.
Vox replied, "But you aren't me. You care too much to let that happen."
"Maybe I don't... Maybe living in a goblin-controlled apocalypse would be fun?" Vicksan lifted his staff. "Maybe I'd enjoy the adventure?"
"Vicksan... Don't!" Bsh yelled out.
"I was only your tool... A means to an end. Find a new sacrifice..." He hit the ground, and disappeared.

"Were did he teleport to?" Bsh looked around.
"He blocked us. Don't bother." Vox looked at the spot Vicksan stood. "It wouldn't matter if we found him... He's picked his choice."
"You know... I don't think the whole dying thing was what angered him." Whiteflame spoke.
"What do you mean?" Bsh looked over at him. Bsh was clearly angry with Whiteflame.
"Think about it... He faced a King Goblin, and trained for a battle he knew could get him killed..." Whiteflame started.
"What are you getting at?" Bsh asked.
"The thing that, I think, got to him... Was that you were all planning on sending him to his inevitable death without his knowing."
"..." Bsh didn't have to think about it. He knew it was true... What they were planning. Vicksan deserved to know.
Vox turned and left.
Bsh saw Godmother leave to her room... He knew she wouldn't accept his apology... "Damnit Airmax..."

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UNKNOWN
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"Innomen." Airmax appeared. "Vicksan has abandoned the plan."
"I am aware." Innomen replied. "You did not do as I said."
"What?" Airmax didn't understand.
"I said to understand the player... You would send him to end his own life without his knowledge. And you used his friends... His closest friends... To do it for you." Innomen gave clear disappointment in his voice.
"..." Airmax wasn't sure what he could say.
"... Do you remember the story Cody would tell us?"
"About the war?" Airmax asked.
"Yes."
"... Yes... I remember..." Airmax knew the story well...
"When you use the people you need... You will cease to have them. Cody learned first hand... And he taught us so we wouldn't make the same mistake." Innomen's voice was saddened.

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MIDNIGHT
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"So... You want to create a body, and transfer Paramix's AI... Or mind or whatever, into the body?" Warem sat back to listen.
"Well... I know it's silly. But yes." Rev hoped Warem would accept helping him.
"Silly? No... Stupid is what it is... But it's also possible. Sure. I'll help. But first, why are you intent on doing this?" Warem asked.
"Well... Paramix is the lead designer of this game, right?" Rev asked.
"Bluesteel said he is... So I assume so."
"Well... I knew him... I didn't know until I found out who Paramix was" Rev started.
"Oh? You knew Paramix in real life? How'd you know him?" Warem sat up. He was more interested now.
"He was... A personal friend." Rev answered.
"I see..." Warem thought it over. "Paramix played a key role in whatever the Modder did... So perhaps he can help us with our little issue. So okay... Let's bring back Paramix."
"Really? You'll help?" Rev was excited.
"Yes. I'll help." Warem smiled. It was one of few times Rev had ever seen Warem do that.

"Okay... Well first we'll need an item of his... Not like a book... No. An item that was close to him. The more you use an item, the closer it aligns with you... I've been looking for his staff, but it's gone." Rev thought it over...
"Hm. An item that's close to him? I'm not sure." Warem thought about it. He couldn't think o
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4/30/2015 4:51:20 PM
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"Okay... Rev. I'm going to tell you this, but don't let anyone find out." Warem begin.
"What is it?" Rev asked.
"Well... There is only one person I know of you can ask... Vicksan." Warem spoke.
"Vicksan? But isn't he a traitor?" Rev asked.
"Yes... But he was also Paramix's best friend on here. He will know where to find something that was close to him." Warem continued, "So you will have to find him. I know where you will need to start. But understand that I can't go with you." Warem explained.
"Oh? I guess because you have to stay to watch over the city?" Rev understood.
"Yes. You must head to a city far South of here called Kroengard. YYW will be there. Find out what you need to from there... In fact, don't sneak in. Just enter. Bsh should be there. He isn't going to fight you for the info... Bringing back Paramix is a goal Kroengard will definitely help with." Warem spoke.
"I see... So go to Kroengard and get help... Sounds easy enough... Thanks." Rev spoke joyfully.
"Yea. Well be careful. The Goblin Invasion starts soon." Warem seemed legitimately concerned.
"I will be." Rev smiled and turned to leave.

Warem walked back into his room to look around more. He knew someone had been in his room earlier...
"What's this?" Warem noticed a book he didn't own laying on his desk... "A notebook?"
He opened it... It was Emberly's. "What? Why is this..." He noticed a bookmark.

Warem went to the bookmarked page and saw the messages from Whiteflame... "A... Prison school..?" Warem dropped the book...
"Hey Warem... What's wrong?" Bookworm was at his door.
"Book. Nothing. I... I just need to find Ember. Do you know where she is?" He asked.
"Oh... Yea. She's in her room." Bookworm stepped back.
Warem turned and walked past her, heading straight for Emberly's room. Bookworm sighed, and walked out.

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MOUNTAIN
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Vicksan had found himself by a cliff. He had only just spawned after teleporting.
"Ahh!" Vicksan hit the ground, holding his chest... It hurt so much...
He yelled out in agony. He remembered Whiteflame telling him that stress made the Rotting Decay worse... But he couldn't stop the stress... It hurt more then the illness... The betrayal stung harder than all of it.

A moment passed, and Vicksan got up. He crawled to the edge of the cliff and sat down.
"It's okay... They'll regret using me when I'm not there to save them..." Vicksan hated them so much... He did everything they... everything Airmax... wanted... And they would make him commit suicide for them...

"That sounds exciting..." A voice crawled from behind.
Vicksan looked back to see a red haired girl walk up, staff in hand.
"So... Who's regretting what? I wanna know..." She smiled sickingly.
"Go away." Vicksan turned back around.
"Oh? That staff.... It's a glitchy floating staff... Wow..." The girl was awestruck by it... She knew exactly what it was.
"Ya. Now go away."
"But I want it..." She laughed. "Can I have it?"
"No. Go away now." Vicksan tried ignoring her.
"That's not very nice." She got out her staff and begin to point it at him. "What if I... barrow it..."

Vicksan's staff lifted off the ground and swung around at her... Pointing directly at her forehead. She back up and laughed.
"See... Now I really want it." She smirked.
"It's level 250. I assume you aren't strong enough to take a hit from it... So either go away. or allow me the chance to test my level..." Vicksan didn't bother looking back.
"So brave... Fine, I'll go away... But I'll find you again... I will have that staff... And when I have it, I'll shove it down your throat, and test it out on you..." The girl giggled and ran off, her laughter echoing behind her.

"Just what I needed..." Vicksan sighed.

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OUTSIDE KROENGARD
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"Maragon." Mekaiel called.
No one came.
Mekaiel stood at the walls of the city, observing the grey wood and ropes that made up the walls. "Maragon!"

"What is it." Maragon appeared behind him.
"The Goblin Invasion... What happens if I get caught in the center?"
"I don't need you alive... So probably nothing." Maragon looked at the city.
"Some Guide Bot you are... Actually... What the hell kind of Guide Bot are you, anyways?" Mekaiel asked.
"Me? I'm me." Maragon replied, "What do you want?"
"I think my survival is a pretty important reason to call you." Mekaiel looked back at him.
"I suppose... What else do you need?"
"Well... I heard about this city... Vicksan created it. YYW entered the city, I guess to spy on it. Do you think you can destroy this wall? I need them on alert, and YYW in need of my assistance... Spies make good informants."
"Mikal. If I destroy this wall, will you stop calling me?" Maragon asked.
"Sure."

The grey wooden wall was submerged in smoke, and a loud crashing and crackling noise burned throughout the site. As the smoke and noise cleared, the area of the wall in front of Mekaiel had fallen, left to feed the fire that had engulfed it.
"Nice." Mekaiel took note of the damage. Maragon was no longer there to hear him. "Hmp. I don't need his help here." Mekaiel jumped down and begin for the other side of the city to enter.

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KROENGARD
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"Bsh!" A soldier ran up. "A side of the wall has collapsed. It's on fire now."
Bsh was wondering around the streets in thought when the soldier ran up. "I heard. Send half the force in to figure out what happened..."
"Sir. Zaradi is already there... He says it looks like an entrance point. We may have be infiltrated." The soldier informed him.
"I see. Have the men on high alert for any one who looks suspicious." Bsh turned for the castle.

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YYW was hiding out in the alley beside Bsh and the soldier. He heard everything... "You have to be kidding me..."

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PASSAGE TO RAVEN'S ROOST
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Bluesteel and her solders were heading back home before the invasion. At least 20 soldiers, Daytona, and Seventh, escorted her.
"Bluesteel. The Goblin Invasion will activate within five minutes... They will immediately begin attacking anyone they see, and in mass." Daytona warned her.
"I'm aware. I programmed a lot of them." Bluesteel replied. The trees and shadows around her with nerve racking.
"Well... They were activated by that Vicksan kid everyone in Midnight was hating on... We should found him..." Seventh got involved in the conversation.
"We don't know a thing about what happened. I'm sure there is more to this than Midnight thinks. To be honest..." Bluesteel cut herself off there.
"To be honest?" Daytona asked.
"It's nothing... Just a thought..." Bluesteel wondered... The turn of events... It was curious if they were really an accident. But what force, or person, could pre-plan an invasion requiring a Goblin that only existed in single player?

A sound caught Seventh's attention... A crackling noise... Like a lot of smaller snapping noises...
"Stop!" Seventh yelled. "Prepare for battle!"
"What?" Daytona looked around them... Goblins at every side and angle...

The Goblins ran in from behind every tree, going at the soldiers with jagged, rotting swords. They cut at the soldiers and mauled at them.
"Defend!" Seventh yelled. "Healers, cast Guard!"
The soldiers pulled up their shields, and begin deflecting the Goblins. Light blocked off the Goblins who had yet to enter the fight.
"Attack!"
The soldiers, in perfect unison, swung their sword over and down on the Goblins. Many of the creatures went grey, fading away only to be replaced by more when the Guard spells wore off.
"Defend!"

Bluesteel watched the Goblins overwhelming the men... She watched them block and swing, only to gain little ground, then be pushed farther back around her...

// WARNING: GOBLIN INVASION --> Activated.

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UNKNOWN
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"Airmax." Innomen spoke.
"Yes?"
"Focus on the girl. I will deal with Vicksan in person..."
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4/30/2015 4:54:22 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
Last Episode: The Midnight Aurora ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Invasion ==> TBA

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For the Audience:
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1 - What do you expect from Emberly and Warem?

2 - Do you think Vicksan's reaction was reasonable?

3 - What do you think Innomen has planned?

What would you like to see in the next 5 episodes?

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4/30/2015 5:14:18 PM
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At 4/30/2015 4:54:22 PM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Midnight Aurora ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Invasion ==> TBA

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For the Audience:
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1 - What do you expect from Emberly and Warem?

A whole bunch of silliness

2 - Do you think Vicksan's reaction was reasonable?

Yeah, but I'm kinda surprised anyone thought it was a good idea to tell him only after he got the ring. It's almost as if they wanted that reaction from him.

3 - What do you think Innomen has planned?

lol idk. But also, I bet this was a test server for switching people and AI given Rev's comments.

What would you like to see in the next 5 episodes?

Seventh v. Rev

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4/30/2015 5:39:01 PM
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At 4/30/2015 5:14:18 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 4/30/2015 4:54:22 PM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Midnight Aurora ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Invasion ==> TBA

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For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Emberly and Warem?

A whole bunch of silliness

Lawl.

2 - Do you think Vicksan's reaction was reasonable?

Yeah, but I'm kinda surprised anyone thought it was a good idea to tell him only after he got the ring. It's almost as if they wanted that reaction from him.

Thats the thing... they didn't. Whiteflame brought it up. Thats why Bsh was mad at Whiteflame.

3 - What do you think Innomen has planned?

lol idk. But also, I bet this was a test server for switching people and AI given Rev's comments.

Interesting theory...

What would you like to see in the next 5 episodes?

Seventh v. Rev

It'll come soon enough. Couldn't fit it in this chapter

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4/30/2015 5:41:55 PM
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At 4/30/2015 5:31:51 PM, RevNge wrote:
Do I get to farm the goblins for xp now?

Lol suuuuure.... now comment XD
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4/30/2015 5:45:26 PM
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At 4/30/2015 5:41:55 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 4/30/2015 5:31:51 PM, RevNge wrote:
Do I get to farm the goblins for xp now?

Lol suuuuure.... now comment XD

Okay :D
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4/30/2015 5:48:35 PM
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At 4/30/2015 4:54:22 PM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Midnight Aurora ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Invasion ==> TBA

----
For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Emberly and Warem?

Warem's going to be butthurt like Endark when he realizes that Ember lied to him.
2 - Do you think Vicksan's reaction was reasonable?

No, he could have become a martyr and became the video game Jesus, but instead, he pvssied out.
3 - What do you think Innomen has planned?

He's going to use Vicksan to do something. And considering that he's gay, I fear for the (many) possibilities.
What would you like to see in the next 5 episodes?

Me n0$c0p1n' Seventh next episode
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I will when I have the time bruh
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4/30/2015 5:57:02 PM
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At 4/30/2015 5:48:35 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 4/30/2015 4:54:22 PM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Midnight Aurora ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Invasion ==> TBA

----
For the Audience:
----

1 - What do you expect from Emberly and Warem?

Warem's going to be butthurt like Endark when he realizes that Ember lied to him.

Gooood.... I can't wait lol

2 - Do you think Vicksan's reaction was reasonable?

No, he could have become a martyr and became the video game Jesus, but instead, he pvssied out.

Lol well think... he was going to kill himself, and no one was going to tell him... they intended to let him commit suicide with his knowing.

3 - What do you think Innomen has planned?

He's going to use Vicksan to do something. And considering that he's gay, I fear for the (many) possibilities.

Um...

What would you like to see in the next 5 episodes?

Me n0$c0p1n' Seventh next episode

I'll do it when I have an opening.

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I will when I have the time bruh

Yayayayayayayayay
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I'll try to get my next chapter out today. I don't have a laptop right now.
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5/8/2015 4:29:38 PM
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At 5/5/2015 2:14:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
I'll try to get my next chapter out today. I don't have a laptop right now.

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5/8/2015 4:39:29 PM
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At 5/8/2015 4:29:38 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/5/2015 2:14:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
I'll try to get my next chapter out today. I don't have a laptop right now.

/:

I've been thinking about it... But no one seems interested anymore.
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5/8/2015 4:40:33 PM
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At 5/8/2015 4:39:29 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:29:38 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/5/2015 2:14:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
I'll try to get my next chapter out today. I don't have a laptop right now.

/:

I've been thinking about it... But no one seems interested anymore.

I think you'd be surprised how many people read it. I read most fanfics, but only comment on a few.
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5/8/2015 4:48:57 PM
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At 5/8/2015 4:40:33 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:39:29 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:29:38 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/5/2015 2:14:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
I'll try to get my next chapter out today. I don't have a laptop right now.

/:

I've been thinking about it... But no one seems interested anymore.

I think you'd be surprised how many people read it. I read most fanfics, but only comment on a few.

I know a few people read it, but if they aren't commenting, I feel like I'm spending 15 hours on each chapter for 2, sometimes 3, people. I don't just want them reading, I want to know they care about it.
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5/9/2015 1:47:32 AM
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At 4/30/2015 4:51:20 PM, donald.keller wrote:
Man, I don't like writing commentary cause I don't get the full effect of the story this way but I'm doing it just this once cause I actually kind of miss writing these reactions.

These are my RAW reactions. I didn't think about what I was going to write about at all. Also, this will count for my feedback.

"Okay... Rev. I'm going to tell you this, but don't let anyone find out." Warem begin.
Oh yeah, forgot to mention that the last post was AWESOME. Holy shite PARAMIX is COMING BACK!!
"What is it?" Rev asked.
"Well... There is only one person I know of you can ask... Vicksan." Warem spoke.
"Vicksan? But isn't he a traitor?" Rev asked.
Damn right he is.
"Yes... But he was also Paramix's best friend on here. He will know where to find something that was close to him." Warem continued, "So you will have to find him. I know where you will need to start. But understand that I can't go with you." Warem explained.
"Oh? I guess because you have to stay to watch over the city?" Rev understood.
"Yes. You must head to a city far South of here called Kroengard. YYW will be there. Find out what you need to from there... In fact, don't sneak in. Just enter. Bsh should be there. He isn't going to fight you for the info... Bringing back Paramix is a goal Kroengard will definitely help with." Warem spoke.
Wait, so YYW and Bsh are close to Paramix, I'm trying to remember their relationship...
"I see... So go to Kroengard and get help... Sounds easy enough... Thanks." Rev spoke joyfully.
Except it ain't gonna be easy is it?
"Yea. Well be careful. The Goblin Invasion starts soon." Warem seemed legitimately concerned.
I wonder, after the goblin invasion what's next? Evil Vox Veritas again? Oh, evil mods right?
"I will be." Rev smiled and turned to leave.

Nope, Rev is never careful.
Warem walked back into his room to look around more. He knew someone had been in his room earlier...
Lol. Those guys should apologize about that.
"What's this?" Warem noticed a book he didn't own laying on his desk... "A notebook?"
He opened it... It was Emberly's. "What? Why is this..." He noticed a bookmark.

Warem went to the bookmarked page and saw the messages from Whiteflame... "A... Prison school..?" Warem dropped the book...
I know right.
"Hey Warem... What's wrong?" Bookworm was at his door.
"Book. Nothing. I... I just need to find Ember. Do you know where she is?" He asked.
"Oh... Yea. She's in her room." Bookworm stepped back.
Warem turned and walked past her, heading straight for Emberly's room. Bookworm sighed, and walked out.
Right in the feels.

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Also, I really liked the added description for the Goblin's appearance. Now that's what I'm talking about :D!
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MOUNTAIN
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Vicksan had found himself by a cliff. He had only just spawned after teleporting.
"Ahh!" Vicksan hit the ground, holding his chest... It hurt so much...
He yelled out in agony. He remembered Whiteflame telling him that stress made the Rotting Decay worse... But he couldn't stop the stress... It hurt more then the illness... The betrayal stung harder than all of it.
THAT, was my favourite part of the previous post. I liked that theme of betrayal and how you shouldn't lie to your friends

A moment passed, and Vicksan got up. He crawled to the edge of the cliff and sat down.
"It's okay... They'll regret using me when I'm not there to save them..." Vicksan hated them so much... He did everything they... everything Airmax... wanted... And they would make him commit suicide for them...

"That sounds exciting..." A voice crawled from behind.
Vicksan looked back to see a red haired girl walk up, staff in hand.
"So... Who's regretting what? I wanna know..." She smiled sickingly.
"Go away." Vicksan turned back around.
"Oh? That staff.... It's a glitchy floating staff... Wow..." The girl was awestruck by it... She knew exactly what it was.
"Ya. Now go away."
Uh.. you might not wanna say that Vicksan. Minx will screw you.
"But I want it..." She laughed. "Can I have it?"
"No. Go away now." Vicksan tried ignoring her.
"That's not very nice." She got out her staff and begin to point it at him. "What if I... barrow it..."
Oh sh*t.

Vicksan's staff lifted off the ground and swung around at her... Pointing directly at her forehead. She back up and laughed.
"See... Now I really want it." She smirked.
Yeah me too.
"It's level 250. I assume you aren't strong enough to take a hit from it... So either go away. or allow me the chance to test my level..." Vicksan didn't bother looking back.
"So brave... Fine, I'll go away... But I'll find you again... I will have that staff... And when I have it, I'll shove it down your throat, and test it out on you..." The girl giggled and ran off, her laughter echoing behind her.
That laughter would have actually been normal if she had said she would stick the staff up Vicksan's... nvm.

"Just what I needed..." Vicksan sighed.
I feel you. Getting threatened is a pain in the arse.

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OUTSIDE KROENGARD
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"Maragon." Mekaiel called.
"God damn it, Maragon that b*tch!"
No one came.
"Son of a -"
Mekaiel stood at the walls of the city, observing the grey wood and ropes that made up the walls. "Maragon!"

"What is it." Maragon appeared behind him.
"The Goblin Invasion... What happens if I get caught in the center?"
"I don't need you alive... So probably nothing." Maragon looked at the city.
"Some Guide Bot you are... Actually... What the hell kind of Guide Bot are you, anyways?" Mekaiel asked.
I always assumed he was there to be some sort of slave or servant.
"Me? I'm me." Maragon replied, "What do you want?"
"I think my survival is a pretty important reason to call you." Mekaiel looked back at him.
"I suppose... What else do you need?"
"Well... I heard about this city... Vicksan created it. YYW entered the city, I guess to spy on it. Do you think you can destroy this wall? I need them on alert, and YYW in need of my assistance... Spies make good informants."
"Mikal. If I destroy this wall, will you stop calling me?" Maragon asked.
"Sure."
Not. :D

The grey wooden wall was submerged in smoke, and a loud crashing and crackling noise burned throughout the site. As the smoke and noise cleared, the area of the wall in front of Mekaiel had fallen, left to feed the fire that had engulfed it.
"Nice." Mekaiel took note of the damage. Maragon was no longer there to hear him. "Hmp. I don't need his help here." Mekaiel jumped down and begin for the other side of the city to enter.

Nice.
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KROENGARD
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"Bsh!" A soldier ran up. "A side of the wall has collapsed. It's on fire now."
Bsh was wondering around the streets in thought when the soldier ran up. "I heard. Send half the force in to figure out what happened..."
"Sir. Zaradi is already there... He says it looks like an entrance point. We may have be infiltrated." The soldier informed him.
"I see. Have the men on high alert for any one who looks suspicious." Bsh turned for the castle.

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YYW was hiding out in the alley beside Bsh and the soldier. He heard everything... "You have to be kidding me..."

What about Paramix!! T.T
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5/9/2015 1:53:38 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 4/30/2015 4:54:22 PM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Midnight Aurora ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Invasion ==> TBA

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For the Audience:
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1 - What do you expect from Emberly and Warem?

I think they'd make a good couple.
2 - Do you think Vicksan's reaction was reasonable?

Yup.
3 - What do you think Innomen has planned?

Don't know.
What would you like to see in the next 5 episodes?

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BONUS
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I'd appreciate if readers did a commentary if they have the time. Thank you!

Done.
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5/9/2015 2:00:01 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/9/2015 1:53:38 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 4/30/2015 4:54:22 PM, donald.keller wrote:
Last Episode: The Midnight Aurora ==> http://www.debate.org...

Next Episode: The Invasion ==> TBA

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For the Audience:
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1 - What do you expect from Emberly and Warem?

I think they'd make a good couple.

Well I meant from the issues arising? lol.

2 - Do you think Vicksan's reaction was reasonable?

Yup.

Good... I was worried people would think he over reacted... Imagine your friends planned to have you kill yourself. And like Whiteflame said, Vicksan's shown he's willing to sacrifice himself.

Question: How do you feel about my take on Airmax?

3 - What do you think Innomen has planned?

Don't know.

You excited to see him enter the game?

What would you like to see in the next 5 episodes?

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BONUS
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I'd appreciate if readers did a commentary if they have the time. Thank you!

Done.

Yay!
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5/9/2015 2:09:37 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/9/2015 1:47:32 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 4/30/2015 4:51:20 PM, donald.keller wrote:
"Okay... Rev. I'm going to tell you this, but don't let anyone find out." Warem begin.
Oh yeah, forgot to mention that the last post was AWESOME. Holy shite PARAMIX is COMING BACK!!

Maybe. lol
At least everyone's as excited as I am about that lol. Endarkened's probably pissed.

"What is it?" Rev asked.
"Well... There is only one person I know of you can ask... Vicksan." Warem spoke.
"Vicksan? But isn't he a traitor?" Rev asked.
Damn right he is.

Oh hell ya... Propaganda can't be wrong, right?

info... Bringing back Paramix is a goal Kroengard will definitely help with." Warem spoke.
Wait, so YYW and Bsh are close to Paramix, I'm trying to remember their relationship...

YYW had no relationship. He's just there spying. Bsh's relationship with Paramix is by association with Vicksan.

"I see... So go to Kroengard and get help... Sounds easy enough... Thanks." Rev spoke joyfully.
Except it ain't gonna be easy is it?

Well what just happened at the end of this chapter?

"Yea. Well be careful. The Goblin Invasion starts soon." Warem seemed legitimately concerned.
I wonder, after the goblin invasion what's next? Evil Vox Veritas again? Oh, evil mods right?

If I don't leave, it might be the main enemy.. Depending on if I shorten it to only 4 seasons.

"I will be." Rev smiled and turned to leave.

Nope, Rev is never careful.

Ha... So true...

Warem walked back into his room to look around more. He knew someone had been in his room earlier...
Lol. Those guys should apologize about that.
"What's this?" Warem noticed a book he didn't own laying on his desk... "A notebook?"
He opened it... It was Emberly's. "What? Why is this..." He noticed a bookmark.

Warem went to the bookmarked page and saw the messages from Whiteflame... "A... Prison school..?" Warem dropped the book...
I know right.

Theories?

"Hey Warem... What's wrong?" Bookworm was at his door.
"Book. Nothing. I... I just need to find Ember. Do you know where she is?" He asked.
"Oh... Yea. She's in her room." Bookworm stepped back.
Warem turned and walked past her, heading straight for Emberly's room. Bookworm sighed, and walked out.
Right in the feels.

Bookworm is just having a hard time, isn't she?


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Also, I really liked the added description for the Goblin's appearance. Now that's what I'm talking about :D!

I hoped it'd be good. Bluesteel's situation was a perfect for that.

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MOUNTAIN
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Vicksan had found himself by a cliff. He had only just spawned after teleporting.
"Ahh!" Vicksan hit the ground, holding his chest... It hurt so much...
He yelled out in agony. He remembered Whiteflame telling him that stress made the Rotting Decay worse... But he couldn't stop the stress... It hurt more then the illness... The betrayal stung harder than all of it.
THAT, was my favourite part of the previous post. I liked that theme of betrayal and how you shouldn't lie to your friends

Aye. Godmother had no idea. I liked how he cursed Airmax, and then it went to Airmax talking to Innomen. So now how do you think they will stop the Goblins? Vicksan can't do it without dying.

A moment passed, and Vicksan got up. He crawled to the edge of the cliff and sat down.
"It's okay... They'll regret using me when I'm not there to save them..." Vicksan hated them so much... He did everything they... everything Airmax... wanted... And they would make him commit suicide for them...

"That sounds exciting..." A voice crawled from behind.
Vicksan looked back to see a red haired girl walk up, staff in hand.
"So... Who's regretting what? I wanna know..." She smiled sickingly.
"Go away." Vicksan turned back around.
"Oh? That staff.... It's a glitchy floating staff... Wow..." The girl was awestruck by it... She knew exactly what it was.
"Ya. Now go away."
Uh.. you might not wanna say that Vicksan. Minx will screw you.

So question... Who's enemy do you think Minx is? Mekaiel's, or Vicksans?

"But I want it..." She laughed. "Can I have it?"
"No. Go away now." Vicksan tried ignoring her.
"That's not very nice." She got out her staff and begin to point it at him. "What if I... barrow it..."
Oh sh*t.

Vicksan's staff lifted off the ground and swung around at her... Pointing directly at her forehead. She back up and laughed.
"See... Now I really want it." She smirked.
Yeah me too.

It is a bada$$ staff...

"It's level 250. I assume you aren't strong enough to take a hit from it... So either go away. or allow me the chance to test my level..." Vicksan didn't bother looking back.
"So brave... Fine, I'll go away... But I'll find you again... I will have that staff... And when I have it, I'll shove it down your throat, and test it out on you..." The girl giggled and ran off, her laughter echoing behind her.
That laughter would have actually been normal if she had said she would stick the staff up Vicksan's... nvm.

*cries thinking about it*

"Just what I needed..." Vicksan sighed.
I feel you. Getting threatened is a pain in the arse.

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OUTSIDE KROENGARD
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"Maragon." Mekaiel called.
"God damn it, Maragon that b*tch!"

Theories about Maragon? People seem to ignore his place in the story.

No one came.
"Son of a -"
Mekaiel stood at the walls of the city, observing the grey wood and ropes that made up the walls. "Maragon!"

"What is it." Maragon appeared behind him.
"The Goblin Invasion... What happens if I get caught in the center?"
"I don't need you alive... So probably nothing." Maragon looked at the city.
"Some Guide Bot you are... Actually... What the hell kind of Guide Bot are you, anyways?" Mekaiel asked.
I always assumed he was there to be some sort of slave or servant.

Ya... kind of ruin that theory, didn't I?

"Mikal. If I destroy this wall, will you stop calling me?" Maragon asked.
"Sure."
Not. :D

lawl

The grey wooden wall was submerged in smoke, and a loud crashing and crackling noise burned throughout the site. As the smoke and noise cleared, the area of the wall in front of Mekaiel had fallen, left to feed the fire that had engulfed it.
"Nice." Mekaiel took note of the damage. Maragon was no longer there to hear him. "Hmp. I don't need his help here." Mekaiel jumped down and begin for the other side of the city to enter.

Nice.
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YYW was hiding out in the alley beside Bsh and the soldier. He heard everything... "You have to be kidding me..."

What about Paramix!! T.T

In time XD
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5/10/2015 11:46:52 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/8/2015 4:48:57 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:40:33 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:39:29 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:29:38 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/5/2015 2:14:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
I'll try to get my next chapter out today. I don't have a laptop right now.

/:

I've been thinking about it... But no one seems interested anymore.

I think you'd be surprised how many people read it. I read most fanfics, but only comment on a few.

I know a few people read it, but if they aren't commenting, I feel like I'm spending 15 hours on each chapter for 2, sometimes 3, people. I don't just want them reading, I want to know they care about it.

If I write a commentary, will you stop being butthurt and post the next episode?

You know, you probably shouldn't put this in the Misc forum if you want more viewers...
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5/11/2015 12:01:30 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/10/2015 11:46:52 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:48:57 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:40:33 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:39:29 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:29:38 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/5/2015 2:14:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
I'll try to get my next chapter out today. I don't have a laptop right now.

/:

I've been thinking about it... But no one seems interested anymore.

I think you'd be surprised how many people read it. I read most fanfics, but only comment on a few.

I know a few people read it, but if they aren't commenting, I feel like I'm spending 15 hours on each chapter for 2, sometimes 3, people. I don't just want them reading, I want to know they care about it.

If I write a commentary, will you stop being butthurt and post the next episode?

You know, you probably shouldn't put this in the Misc forum if you want more viewers...

You already said you'd do a commentary
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5/11/2015 12:19:28 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/10/2015 11:46:52 PM, RevNge wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:48:57 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:40:33 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:39:29 PM, donald.keller wrote:
At 5/8/2015 4:29:38 PM, SeventhProfessor wrote:
At 5/5/2015 2:14:16 PM, donald.keller wrote:
I'll try to get my next chapter out today. I don't have a laptop right now.

/:

I've been thinking about it... But no one seems interested anymore.

I think you'd be surprised how many people read it. I read most fanfics, but only comment on a few.

I know a few people read it, but if they aren't commenting, I feel like I'm spending 15 hours on each chapter for 2, sometimes 3, people. I don't just want them reading, I want to know they care about it.

If I write a commentary, will you stop being butthurt and post the next episode?

You know, you probably shouldn't put this in the Misc forum if you want more viewers...

Also, I am finishing the season.
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