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Perussi
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10/10/2016 11:56:21 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
Give me something and i will critique it.
"Jesus was an atheist"
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"circle, blue, cross, bacon"
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"You are forgiven my child... Your lamentations have un-hardened my heart and hence I have lifted thine DDO plague of 503..."
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"So sayeth Professor Perussi. All hail his infinite wisdom."
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"No"
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illegalcombat
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10/11/2016 6:33:30 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 10/10/2016 9:04:16 PM, Cody_Franklin wrote:
At 10/10/2016 11:56:21 AM, Perussi wrote:
Give me something and i will critique it.

http://www.debate.org...

Well played.
Perussi
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10/11/2016 9:26:34 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 10/10/2016 9:04:16 PM, Cody_Franklin wrote:
At 10/10/2016 11:56:21 AM, Perussi wrote:
Give me something and i will critique it.

http://www.debate.org...

Nothing to see yet.
"Jesus was an atheist"
-Harikrish-

"circle, blue, cross, bacon"
-Vaarka-

"You are forgiven my child... Your lamentations have un-hardened my heart and hence I have lifted thine DDO plague of 503..."
-Airmax1227-

"So sayeth Professor Perussi. All hail his infinite wisdom."
-Goldtop-

"No"
-Airmax1227-

DO NOT TAKE THIS LINK: http://www.debate.org...
Perussi
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10/11/2016 9:32:24 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 10/11/2016 2:56:37 AM, Godgirl wrote:
At 10/10/2016 11:56:21 AM, Perussi wrote:
Give me something and i will critique it.

This beautiful literary work.
https://www.fictionpress.com...

It says it was intentionally made lame...
Meh. Everyone is important butterfly and rainbows.
This warms somebody's heart but isn't that good of a story.
But diolouge was used well.
"Jesus was an atheist"
-Harikrish-

"circle, blue, cross, bacon"
-Vaarka-

"You are forgiven my child... Your lamentations have un-hardened my heart and hence I have lifted thine DDO plague of 503..."
-Airmax1227-

"So sayeth Professor Perussi. All hail his infinite wisdom."
-Goldtop-

"No"
-Airmax1227-

DO NOT TAKE THIS LINK: http://www.debate.org...
Godgirl
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10/11/2016 10:31:32 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 10/11/2016 9:32:24 AM, Perussi wrote:
At 10/11/2016 2:56:37 AM, Godgirl wrote:
At 10/10/2016 11:56:21 AM, Perussi wrote:
Give me something and i will critique it.

This beautiful literary work.
https://www.fictionpress.com...

It says it was intentionally made lame...
Meh. Everyone is important butterfly and rainbows.
This warms somebody's heart but isn't that good of a story.
Yeah. It was a biology assignment to write a story that explained all the cell organelles and still have a plot. I don't think there was a way to not make it lame.
But diolouge was used well.
Thanks.