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Microsuck
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9/28/2012 9:55:45 AM
Posted: 4 years ago
Hey guys,

What are your thoughts on my new school portfolio at http://dneff.ccstweb.org...
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OllerupMand
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9/28/2012 11:30:37 AM
Posted: 4 years ago
How and what you write in a portfolio is very different depending on cultur, but I can say something about your design. It is mostly small graphical stuff, but well...

Maybe it is just my device, but your text and picture is very close to the boarder lines. Also your having a number of punctural mistakes, which reflects bad on you. Do something about the picture in "About me" You fall into the background because of the colour. Getting some more text onto the "Home" page and something to break it up with would make it look better. You could maybe write what kind of work your doing and price. Your big name in the left corner have its buttom clipped. Looks weird.