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GeoLaureate8
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12/12/2012 2:59:30 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
I wrote a rap for a rap battle on a hip hop site against "$ineedmoney$" so I came at him with some economic attacks. I started off attacking him scientifically, then economically, then I broke him down biologically.

"You ain't anywhere near my celestial sphere
My biomechanical twenty-fifty year Lamborgini here
Travels Mach-6 4,000 knots, turn you to pedestrian smear
My nuclear fission reactor output 28 gigawatts
Triangular ley line energy combine amounts enough to make Jigga stop
No matter how many joules of work you output, you still a flop
You a degenerate single cell cheap rhetoric natural selection non-survivalist
Not even a single human or non-human can reach a level as high is this
I've reached a precipice that warrants God-like piousness

Ineedmoney think it's funny but he's enslaved by monetary ways
It doesn't pay to live for profit in a Federal Reserve maze
Unphazed, I decoded the economic secret and the fiat monopoly system
You still ripped off unknowingly, a fractional reserve banking victim
Diagrammatical, macroeconomical, mathematical prognosis leave you hopeless
You support the system that monetarily enslaves you, how could you promote this
The diagnosis, reveal that Federal Reserve notes is debt, you shoulda known this
But now you owe this bogus system cause you weren't focused and didn't notice
This socio-economic crisis and complex decontruction of your worldview cause you psychosis
Rothbard and Hayek warned about inflation and the business cycle
Of course the financial system was designed to collapse, why would this surprise you
Now the wisest despise you

You just an insignificant crumb with a disconnected ecology
Competitive exclusion principle dictates that you won't survive with inferior biology
I genetitically split you at the molecular level with no apology
My cosmic zoom lense views 100 septillian lightyears into space
With my cybernetic modules interactive interface
I can remotely launch you deep into space
Everything I do is success, everything falls into place
My battle abilities are notably qualified
Your bodily remnants scattered by my incineration with smell of formaldehyde
My advanced lyrical darts land right square in your heart
All of your physical severed, there will be no sparin your parts
Ninety-nine percent of you hate hip hop, now start respectin the art"

-- MC Laureate
http://community.allhiphop.com...

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"We must raise the standard of the Old, free, decentralized, and strictly limited Republic."
-- Murray Rothbard

"The worst thing that can happen to a good cause is, not to be skillfully attacked, but to be ineptly defended."
-- Frederic Bastiat
Oryus
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12/12/2012 3:03:19 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
You are, without a doubt, a talented writer, Geo.

Well done.
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
Agent_Orange
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12/12/2012 3:09:03 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
BOOOOOOOO.

You really want to battle? Send me a challenge boy. I won't use a single scientific word and will still merc you.
#BlackLivesMatter
Ren
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12/12/2012 3:14:52 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 3:09:03 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
BOOOOOOOO.

You really want to battle? Send me a challenge boy. I won't use a single scientific word and will still merc you.

Drop something.
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12/12/2012 3:32:14 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 3:14:52 PM, Ren wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:09:03 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
BOOOOOOOO.

You really want to battle? Send me a challenge boy. I won't use a single scientific word and will still merc you.

Drop something.

Actually I'm having second thoughts. I know I'm a better battle rapper but you guys don't seem to know much about battle rap.
#BlackLivesMatter
Oryus
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12/12/2012 3:41:31 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 3:32:14 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:14:52 PM, Ren wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:09:03 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
BOOOOOOOO.

You really want to battle? Send me a challenge boy. I won't use a single scientific word and will still merc you.

Drop something.

Actually I'm having second thoughts. I know I'm a better battle rapper but you guys don't seem to know much about battle rap.

Then it should be all the easier for you.
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
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12/12/2012 3:54:57 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 3:41:31 PM, Oryus wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:32:14 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:14:52 PM, Ren wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:09:03 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
BOOOOOOOO.

You really want to battle? Send me a challenge boy. I won't use a single scientific word and will still merc you.

Drop something.

Actually I'm having second thoughts. I know I'm a better battle rapper but you guys don't seem to know much about battle rap.

Then it should be all the easier for you.

You'd think that right? but it feels like....Ice Cube trying to rap against YG or something. Yeah Cube is 1000x better but the game itself has changed to where this new bullsh*t is accepted as good. I start using punchlines, metaphors, wordplay and you people won't like it because I didn't start talking about the universe and sh*t or because I won't force big words to come off as more intellectual. meh
#BlackLivesMatter
GeoLaureate8
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12/12/2012 3:57:29 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 3:32:14 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
Actually I'm having second thoughts. I know I'm a better battle rapper but you guys don't seem to know much about battle rap.

Many of us here know a lot about battle rap. I've listened to the great battle pioneers for years.

If youre so confident, drop a verse you've already written from the past.
"We must raise the standard of the Old, free, decentralized, and strictly limited Republic."
-- Murray Rothbard

"The worst thing that can happen to a good cause is, not to be skillfully attacked, but to be ineptly defended."
-- Frederic Bastiat
GeoLaureate8
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12/12/2012 4:00:23 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 3:54:57 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:41:31 PM, Oryus wrote:
Then it should be all the easier for you.

You'd think that right? but it feels like....Ice Cube trying to rap against YG or something. Yeah Cube is 1000x better but the game itself has changed to where this new bullsh*t is accepted as good. I start using punchlines, metaphors, wordplay and you people won't like it because I didn't start talking about the universe and sh*t or because I won't force big words to come off as more intellectual. meh

Everyone here appreciates Big L, Biggie Smalls, Big Pun, and Eminem. My rhymes are not representative of the style of everyone here. I've created my own niche of esoteric, pretentious rhymes. Most here don't rhyme like I do, they have their own style and niche.
"We must raise the standard of the Old, free, decentralized, and strictly limited Republic."
-- Murray Rothbard

"The worst thing that can happen to a good cause is, not to be skillfully attacked, but to be ineptly defended."
-- Frederic Bastiat
Oryus
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12/12/2012 4:24:27 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 4:00:23 PM, GeoLaureate8 wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:54:57 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:41:31 PM, Oryus wrote:
Then it should be all the easier for you.

You'd think that right? but it feels like....Ice Cube trying to rap against YG or something. Yeah Cube is 1000x better but the game itself has changed to where this new bullsh*t is accepted as good. I start using punchlines, metaphors, wordplay and you people won't like it because I didn't start talking about the universe and sh*t or because I won't force big words to come off as more intellectual. meh

Everyone here appreciates Big L, Biggie Smalls, Big Pun, and Eminem. My rhymes are not representative of the style of everyone here. I've created my own niche of esoteric, pretentious rhymes. Most here don't rhyme like I do, they have their own style and niche.

haha NOBODY here rhymes like Geo.

I think you should just do it, orange. Just make an explicit criteria for voters to consider if you're worried.

For example, when I rapped against someone on the site, I used a lot of slant rhymes and a lot of kids who voted didn't see slant rhymes as "rhymes." So even though I may have had better flow and punches, people honed in on the fact that I said things like,
"I'm He Who Shall Not Be Named.
My impeccable rhyme scheme puts your clown act to shame.
Accio Harley Quinn. I require a Whore-crux.
Make my wins eternal, turn opponents to eunuchs."

and he said things like,

"Okay guys, my name is the joker.
putting out this ugly 50 year old smoker
whose game face is on like he's playing poker
Sending out small cash flows to his broker"

And he still got points for the rhymes from people who proooobably didn't know anything about rap, and thus that slant-rhymes are totally acceptable if used well... Style points.
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
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12/12/2012 4:38:43 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 3:57:29 PM, GeoLaureate8 wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:32:14 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
Actually I'm having second thoughts. I know I'm a better battle rapper but you guys don't seem to know much about battle rap.

Many of us here know a lot about battle rap. I've listened to the great battle pioneers for years.

If youre so confident, drop a verse you've already written from the past.

Ok just a few bars.

Microphone check
1 2 check
AO check beef like a meat inspector
the best of the best kid
not to mention the sex b*tch
the reason why
you and your ex are now exes
I hate to brag but you killed my patience, hating
So now I rub it in your face like acne medication
the only real one on this site regarding rapping
because way before I spit it
somebody done seen it happen
So my words is confirmed and reaffirmed
Like the fact I burn rappers
QUICK! GET HIM AN URN!
Testing a great. Many done took they turn
I'm like "The school system failed"
Cause these kids ain't learned.
Theres only one great.
Why would you debate?
Got your new chick covered like shake n bake
She aint gonna get turned down,
she gonna get turned out.
like cigs when I'm done smoking
her butt burned out
My mind is f*cking menace
but the pen got power
Flow at you kids early
call it "The baby shower"
You ain't nothing like me,see girls really like me
pillow case sex life, I get head nightly
Your threats don't excite me
Your bars is humor
Plus my pockets bulge like my thighs got tumors
Man it's not a rumor
my cash is really like that
the reason she telling you "Baby I'll be right back.."
I know you want to fight that but you know better
Cause I rip rappers up like collections letters
Tell me who's more clever, and I'll lay my crown down
But for now I come from everywhere, like I flow in surround sound
Come, Calm down I'm almost done homie, hush
Or I'll put you on ice like an Anheuser-Busch
Where's the copyright fee? Rappers tryna sound just like me
but the flow is beef jerky, it's so tough to bite G
#BlackLivesMatter
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12/12/2012 5:31:33 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 4:38:43 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:

because way before I spit it
somebody done seen it happen

You inspect beef? Well, that's a relief.
Check yourself quick, while I sharpen my teeth...
Danielle
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12/12/2012 8:18:51 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
Nice job, Geo. I think it's one of those pieces that works better as spoken poetry, because I doubt it would stay on beat if there were music to it. Great lyrics though.
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popculturepooka
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12/12/2012 8:27:47 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 4:38:43 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:57:29 PM, GeoLaureate8 wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:32:14 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
Actually I'm having second thoughts. I know I'm a better battle rapper but you guys don't seem to know much about battle rap.

Many of us here know a lot about battle rap. I've listened to the great battle pioneers for years.

If youre so confident, drop a verse you've already written from the past.

Ok just a few bars.

Microphone check
1 2 check
AO check beef like a meat inspector
the best of the best kid
not to mention the sex b*tch
the reason why
you and your ex are now exes
I hate to brag but you killed my patience, hating
So now I rub it in your face like acne medication
the only real one on this site regarding rapping
because way before I spit it
somebody done seen it happen
So my words is confirmed and reaffirmed
Like the fact I burn rappers
QUICK! GET HIM AN URN!
Testing a great. Many done took they turn
I'm like "The school system failed"
Cause these kids ain't learned.
Theres only one great.
Why would you debate?
Got your new chick covered like shake n bake
She aint gonna get turned down,
she gonna get turned out.
like cigs when I'm done smoking
her butt burned out
My mind is f*cking menace
but the pen got power
Flow at you kids early
call it "The baby shower"
You ain't nothing like me,see girls really like me
pillow case sex life, I get head nightly
Your threats don't excite me
Your bars is humor
Plus my pockets bulge like my thighs got tumors
Man it's not a rumor
my cash is really like that
the reason she telling you "Baby I'll be right back.."
I know you want to fight that but you know better
Cause I rip rappers up like collections letters
Tell me who's more clever, and I'll lay my crown down
But for now I come from everywhere, like I flow in surround sound
Come, Calm down I'm almost done homie, hush
Or I'll put you on ice like an Anheuser-Busch
Where's the copyright fee? Rappers tryna sound just like me
but the flow is beef jerky, it's so tough to bite G

Lol, you'd get name flipped so hard.
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Danielle
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12/13/2012 10:36:21 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
Nice verse, AO. I definitely have an appreciation for cleverness in addition to just complex word usage, though I think there's merit in both. I like both yours and Geo's style-- we should all battle sometime! I've heard the acne medication in your face line before though, but the "like my thighs got tumors" line made me laugh :)
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12/13/2012 11:33:45 AM
Posted: 3 years ago
This was a bit more than decent, in my opinion. Have you ever recorded anything?
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12/13/2012 6:36:45 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/12/2012 8:27:47 PM, popculturepooka wrote:
At 12/12/2012 4:38:43 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:57:29 PM, GeoLaureate8 wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:32:14 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
Actually I'm having second thoughts. I know I'm a better battle rapper but you guys don't seem to know much about battle rap.

Many of us here know a lot about battle rap. I've listened to the great battle pioneers for years.

If youre so confident, drop a verse you've already written from the past.

Ok just a few bars.

Microphone check
1 2 check
AO check beef like a meat inspector
the best of the best kid
not to mention the sex b*tch
the reason why
you and your ex are now exes
I hate to brag but you killed my patience, hating
So now I rub it in your face like acne medication
the only real one on this site regarding rapping
because way before I spit it
somebody done seen it happen
So my words is confirmed and reaffirmed
Like the fact I burn rappers
QUICK! GET HIM AN URN!
Testing a great. Many done took they turn
I'm like "The school system failed"
Cause these kids ain't learned.
Theres only one great.
Why would you debate?
Got your new chick covered like shake n bake
She aint gonna get turned down,
she gonna get turned out.
like cigs when I'm done smoking
her butt burned out
My mind is f*cking menace
but the pen got power
Flow at you kids early
call it "The baby shower"
You ain't nothing like me,see girls really like me
pillow case sex life, I get head nightly
Your threats don't excite me
Your bars is humor
Plus my pockets bulge like my thighs got tumors
Man it's not a rumor
my cash is really like that
the reason she telling you "Baby I'll be right back.."
I know you want to fight that but you know better
Cause I rip rappers up like collections letters
Tell me who's more clever, and I'll lay my crown down
But for now I come from everywhere, like I flow in surround sound
Come, Calm down I'm almost done homie, hush
Or I'll put you on ice like an Anheuser-Busch
Where's the copyright fee? Rappers tryna sound just like me
but the flow is beef jerky, it's so tough to bite G

Lol, you'd get name flipped so hard.

How so?
#BlackLivesMatter
Oryus
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12/13/2012 6:45:37 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
At 12/13/2012 6:36:45 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
At 12/12/2012 8:27:47 PM, popculturepooka wrote:
At 12/12/2012 4:38:43 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:57:29 PM, GeoLaureate8 wrote:
At 12/12/2012 3:32:14 PM, Agent_Orange wrote:
Actually I'm having second thoughts. I know I'm a better battle rapper but you guys don't seem to know much about battle rap.

Many of us here know a lot about battle rap. I've listened to the great battle pioneers for years.

If youre so confident, drop a verse you've already written from the past.

Ok just a few bars.

Microphone check
1 2 check
AO check beef like a meat inspector
the best of the best kid
not to mention the sex b*tch
the reason why
you and your ex are now exes
I hate to brag but you killed my patience, hating
So now I rub it in your face like acne medication
the only real one on this site regarding rapping
because way before I spit it
somebody done seen it happen
So my words is confirmed and reaffirmed
Like the fact I burn rappers
QUICK! GET HIM AN URN!
Testing a great. Many done took they turn
I'm like "The school system failed"
Cause these kids ain't learned.
Theres only one great.
Why would you debate?
Got your new chick covered like shake n bake
She aint gonna get turned down,
she gonna get turned out.
like cigs when I'm done smoking
her butt burned out
My mind is f*cking menace
but the pen got power
Flow at you kids early
call it "The baby shower"
You ain't nothing like me,see girls really like me
pillow case sex life, I get head nightly
Your threats don't excite me
Your bars is humor
Plus my pockets bulge like my thighs got tumors
Man it's not a rumor
my cash is really like that
the reason she telling you "Baby I'll be right back.."
I know you want to fight that but you know better
Cause I rip rappers up like collections letters
Tell me who's more clever, and I'll lay my crown down
But for now I come from everywhere, like I flow in surround sound
Come, Calm down I'm almost done homie, hush
Or I'll put you on ice like an Anheuser-Busch
Where's the copyright fee? Rappers tryna sound just like me
but the flow is beef jerky, it's so tough to bite G

Lol, you'd get name flipped so hard.

How so?

You know, cause there are tons of words that rhyme with orange.
: : :Tulle: The fool, I purposely don't engage with you because you don't have proper command of the English language.
: :
: : The Fool: It's my English writing. Either way It's okay have a larger vocabulary then you, and a better grasp of language, and you're a woman.
:
: I'm just going to leave this precious struggle nugget right here.
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12/13/2012 10:11:41 PM
Posted: 3 years ago
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