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A poem for DDO

tylergraham95
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4/1/2014 1:26:24 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
I wrote a poem for DDO
(JK I wrote it for a girl)

You
By: Tyler Graham

I want you

Call it the "cupcake phase" or just plain infatuation, but I want you

I want to take you somewhere nice
Where we can just be with each other
Smile, look into your eyes
Talk together
Tell you about me
Tell me about you
Feel the staccato beats of my heart

I want you to take me by the hand and lead me into a dark room where sweet silence sweeps me away and the focus lies only on your words, and your words are so enthralling to hear that I am left soundless and still

I want my heart to skip a beat everytime I think of you
I want to think of you every day

I want to spend time with you and then stop time with you.

I want to run my fingers through the crimson in your hair as the crimson in my veins begins to surge, and our lips touch, so gentle at first, and then we both begin to just smile and allow the fire in the air and in our hearts to take us as we pull each other closer.

I want to hear a million more of your cute little giggles that you seem to think are so awkward.

Then I want to stop, and listen more.

I want to hear every embarrassing story you share.

I want to share and compare our essays, and poetry, and art, and our feelings
I want to be dumbfounded by just how clever and funny you really are
I want to share my favorite fragile things with you

I want to share a moment over coffee and literature. Sharing words with you is special to me.

I want you to read this and laugh at just how cheesy and cliche it is

Then we laugh
And
Share another smile
And
Share another story,
And
Share another laugh
And
Share another sweet kiss

I want to hear about the things you"re passionate about.

You blush and think that you"re boring, but you"re not and I know that and I tell you, and it"s just so cute that I can"t help but smile and laugh because I just really really really really like hearing what you have to say because you just don"t stop being interesting.

I want you to procrastinate as long as you can before finally resigning to going home after an angry call from a disgruntled parent. I"ll apologize and you"ll say it"s fine. I"ll still feel bad, but I relish every second we have together.

I want you to come over and just sit with me, back to back, or face to face reading our favorite books, and sharing our favorite passages.

I want you to listen to me as I spill my guts and give you my awful life story because,
I want you to know the truth about me as best as I can tell it because,
I want you to trust me so our relationship lasts because,
I want you to want me because....

I want you.


Sooooooooooo....

Tell me, DDO

Should I give it to her?
"we dig" - Jeanette Runquist (1943 - 2015)
GodChoosesLife
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4/1/2014 4:36:35 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
Wow...
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad
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4/1/2014 8:13:57 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/1/2014 4:36:35 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Wow...

Good wow or bad wow?
"we dig" - Jeanette Runquist (1943 - 2015)
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4/1/2014 8:16:28 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/1/2014 8:13:57 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 4:36:35 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Wow...

Good wow or bad wow?

That was more of like I can visually see your words out to life. So guess it would be good. Your very descriptive and I can kinda try put for a voice although I've never herd your voice live but I can def hear a voice coming from it. Deep poem.
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad
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4/1/2014 8:25:59 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/1/2014 8:16:28 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:13:57 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 4:36:35 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Wow...

Good wow or bad wow?

That was more of like I can visually see your words out to life. So guess it would be good. Your very descriptive and I can kinda try put for a voice although I've never herd your voice live but I can def hear a voice coming from it. Deep poem.

Should I give it to her?
"we dig" - Jeanette Runquist (1943 - 2015)
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4/1/2014 8:31:31 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/1/2014 8:25:59 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:16:28 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:13:57 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 4:36:35 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Wow...

Good wow or bad wow?

That was more of like I can visually see your words out to life. So guess it would be good. Your very descriptive and I can kinda try put for a voice although I've never herd your voice live but I can def hear a voice coming from it. Deep poem.

Should I give it to her?
I say yes.
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad
tylergraham95
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4/1/2014 9:25:18 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/1/2014 8:31:31 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:25:59 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:16:28 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:13:57 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 4:36:35 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Wow...

Good wow or bad wow?

That was more of like I can visually see your words out to life. So guess it would be good. Your very descriptive and I can kinda try put for a voice although I've never herd your voice live but I can def hear a voice coming from it. Deep poem.

Should I give it to her?
I say yes.

It's not too creepy?
"we dig" - Jeanette Runquist (1943 - 2015)
GodChoosesLife
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4/1/2014 9:26:34 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/1/2014 9:25:18 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:31:31 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:25:59 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:16:28 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:13:57 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 4:36:35 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Wow...

Good wow or bad wow?

That was more of like I can visually see your words out to life. So guess it would be good. Your very descriptive and I can kinda try put for a voice although I've never herd your voice live but I can def hear a voice coming from it. Deep poem.

Should I give it to her?
I say yes.

It's not too creepy?
It's a poem... Lol
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad
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4/1/2014 9:27:22 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/1/2014 9:26:34 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 9:25:18 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:31:31 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:25:59 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:16:28 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:13:57 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 4:36:35 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Wow...

Good wow or bad wow?

That was more of like I can visually see your words out to life. So guess it would be good. Your very descriptive and I can kinda try put for a voice although I've never herd your voice live but I can def hear a voice coming from it. Deep poem.

Should I give it to her?
I say yes.

It's not too creepy?
It's a poem... Lol

I guess you're right. Thanks for the advice and the kind words :)
"we dig" - Jeanette Runquist (1943 - 2015)
GodChoosesLife
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4/1/2014 9:29:08 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 4/1/2014 9:27:22 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 9:26:34 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 9:25:18 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:31:31 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:25:59 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:16:28 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 4/1/2014 8:13:57 AM, tylergraham95 wrote:
At 4/1/2014 4:36:35 AM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Wow...

Good wow or bad wow?

That was more of like I can visually see your words out to life. So guess it would be good. Your very descriptive and I can kinda try put for a voice although I've never herd your voice live but I can def hear a voice coming from it. Deep poem.

Should I give it to her?
I say yes.

It's not too creepy?
It's a poem... Lol

I guess you're right. Thanks for the advice and the kind words :)
No problem :)
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad