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bossyburrito
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6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
GodChoosesLife
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6/28/2014 11:43:18 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Oh my gosh... I started tearing up when I read this... Did you write this??
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
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6/28/2014 11:44:27 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/28/2014 11:43:18 PM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Oh my gosh... I started tearing up when I read this... Did you write this??

Seriously, haha???

I wrote it, yes.
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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6/28/2014 11:45:16 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/28/2014 11:44:27 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:43:18 PM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Oh my gosh... I started tearing up when I read this... Did you write this??

Seriously, haha???
I'm very serious... There's a good reason why though.. I don't wish to say openly :/

I wrote it, yes.
Well done then! It is beautiful! :)
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad
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6/28/2014 11:46:40 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/28/2014 11:45:16 PM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:44:27 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:43:18 PM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Oh my gosh... I started tearing up when I read this... Did you write this??

Seriously, haha???
I'm very serious... There's a good reason why though.. I don't wish to say openly :/

I wrote it, yes.
Well done then! It is beautiful! :)

Thanks, I guess...
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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6/28/2014 11:46:56 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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6/28/2014 11:47:21 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/28/2014 11:46:40 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:45:16 PM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:44:27 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:43:18 PM, GodChoosesLife wrote:
Oh my gosh... I started tearing up when I read this... Did you write this??

Seriously, haha???
I'm very serious... There's a good reason why though.. I don't wish to say openly :/

I wrote it, yes.
Well done then! It is beautiful! :)

Thanks, I guess...

No I guessing allowed... :P
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad
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6/29/2014 12:18:29 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/29/2014 12:11:07 AM, Ore_Ele wrote:
Oh god, is everyone freaking twitterpated?

Completely and fully.
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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6/29/2014 12:22:25 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/29/2014 12:19:26 AM, YYW wrote:
Wow... That's very well done, Bossy.

Seriously... this is the second time I've posted a poem that I spent less than 15 minutes on to wide praise.

Jesus christ, one of the lines is:
"These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle"

for God's sake!
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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6/29/2014 12:24:13 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/29/2014 12:22:25 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:19:26 AM, YYW wrote:
Wow... That's very well done, Bossy.

Seriously... this is the second time I've posted a poem that I spent less than 15 minutes on to wide praise.

Jesus christ, one of the lines is:
"These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle"

for God's sake!

It's well written so of course you'll get acknowledgment for it. Nothing wrong with that dear.
Better than deserved, as ALWAYS.
"The strongest principle of growth lies in human choices."
"The Lord doesn't promise us a perfect life that is free of problems, but he does promise that He'll get us through anything." ~SweeTea
"Good Times" ~ Max
"If Jesus isn't in heaven, then it's not heaven; instead, it's hell." ~anonymous
"Suffering is unimaginably confusing, but it's a way to be drawn closer to God" ~Me
"Tell me what consumes your heart most, and I'll tell you who your God is." ~Dad
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6/29/2014 12:24:34 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/29/2014 12:22:25 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:19:26 AM, YYW wrote:
Wow... That's very well done, Bossy.

Seriously... this is the second time I've posted a poem that I spent less than 15 minutes on to wide praise.

Jesus christ, one of the lines is:
"These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle"

for God's sake!

Not that I don't completely and totally agree with everything I said, Zarroette - I poured my heart into this! It took hours! What I wrote above was a simple typo, nothing more, nothing less.
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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6/29/2014 12:25:34 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/29/2014 12:24:34 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:22:25 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:19:26 AM, YYW wrote:
Wow... That's very well done, Bossy.

Seriously... this is the second time I've posted a poem that I spent less than 15 minutes on to wide praise.

Jesus christ, one of the lines is:
"These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle"

for God's sake!

Not that I don't completely and totally agree with everything I said, Zarroette - I poured my heart into this! It took hours! What I wrote above was a simple typo, nothing more, nothing less.

please don't hurt me
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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6/29/2014 4:38:36 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/29/2014 12:25:34 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:24:34 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:22:25 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:19:26 AM, YYW wrote:
Wow... That's very well done, Bossy.

Seriously... this is the second time I've posted a poem that I spent less than 15 minutes on to wide praise.

Jesus christ, one of the lines is:
"These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle"

for God's sake!

Not that I don't completely and totally agree with everything I said, Zarroette - I poured my heart into this! It took hours! What I wrote above was a simple typo, nothing more, nothing less.

please don't hurt me

LOL

---

On a serious note, this was really sweet. :)
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6/29/2014 5:46:28 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/29/2014 4:38:36 AM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:25:34 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:24:34 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:22:25 AM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 6/29/2014 12:19:26 AM, YYW wrote:
Wow... That's very well done, Bossy.

Seriously... this is the second time I've posted a poem that I spent less than 15 minutes on to wide praise.

Jesus christ, one of the lines is:
"These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle"

for God's sake!

Not that I don't completely and totally agree with everything I said, Zarroette - I poured my heart into this! It took hours! What I wrote above was a simple typo, nothing more, nothing less.

please don't hurt me

LOL

---

On a serious note, this was really sweet. :)

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6/30/2014 2:34:17 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow...
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6/30/2014 3:17:18 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/30/2014 2:34:17 AM, Zarroette wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow...



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7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!
How come when I hit review it sometimes adds my post without me clicking add post?
Does this happen to other people?

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Learn to use emoticons DDO.
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7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!
How come when I hit review it sometimes adds my post without me clicking add post?
Does this happen to other people?

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Learn to use emoticons DDO.
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7/1/2014 10:05:29 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!

Frankly, if I were grading poems, I would only give this one an acceptable score if the writer was under 12 years old. If you want to use it, go right ahead, but I don't see why you would want to.
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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7/1/2014 10:10:50 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 10:05:29 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!

Frankly, if I were grading poems, I would only give this one an acceptable score if the writer was under 12 years old. If you want to use it, go right ahead, but I don't see why you would want to.

Thankyou for allowing me to use your poem,
and I don't think someone that was 12 years old could even think of writing a poem like this! you should take more pride in your work! Although you may not see it as any good, others would love to be able to write poems like this.

Take myself for example, the best piece of writing I have done is a fifty word poem and I can't even remember how it goes! but it got graded a c-.
How come when I hit review it sometimes adds my post without me clicking add post?
Does this happen to other people?

#LEARN TO SPEAK UP
#Cause I can
Learn to use emoticons DDO.
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7/1/2014 10:12:59 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 10:10:50 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:05:29 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!

Frankly, if I were grading poems, I would only give this one an acceptable score if the writer was under 12 years old. If you want to use it, go right ahead, but I don't see why you would want to.

Thankyou for allowing me to use your poem,
and I don't think someone that was 12 years old could even think of writing a poem like this! you should take more pride in your work! Although you may not see it as any good, others would love to be able to write poems like this.

Take myself for example, the best piece of writing I have done is a fifty word poem and I can't even remember how it goes! but it got graded a c-.

Do you need my full name or something, in order to cite it for some godforsaken reason?
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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7/1/2014 10:15:51 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 10:12:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:10:50 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:05:29 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!

Frankly, if I were grading poems, I would only give this one an acceptable score if the writer was under 12 years old. If you want to use it, go right ahead, but I don't see why you would want to.

Thankyou for allowing me to use your poem,
and I don't think someone that was 12 years old could even think of writing a poem like this! you should take more pride in your work! Although you may not see it as any good, others would love to be able to write poems like this.

Take myself for example, the best piece of writing I have done is a fifty word poem and I can't even remember how it goes! but it got graded a c-.

Do you need my full name or something, in order to cite it for some godforsaken reason?

No I'll just use you DDO username and cite where I got it from, unless you would like you full name on it and some other stuff!
How come when I hit review it sometimes adds my post without me clicking add post?
Does this happen to other people?

#LEARN TO SPEAK UP
#Cause I can
Learn to use emoticons DDO.
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7/1/2014 10:18:52 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 10:15:51 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:12:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:10:50 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:05:29 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!

Frankly, if I were grading poems, I would only give this one an acceptable score if the writer was under 12 years old. If you want to use it, go right ahead, but I don't see why you would want to.

Thankyou for allowing me to use your poem,
and I don't think someone that was 12 years old could even think of writing a poem like this! you should take more pride in your work! Although you may not see it as any good, others would love to be able to write poems like this.

Take myself for example, the best piece of writing I have done is a fifty word poem and I can't even remember how it goes! but it got graded a c-.

Do you need my full name or something, in order to cite it for some godforsaken reason?

No I'll just use you DDO username and cite where I got it from, unless you would like you full name on it and some other stuff!

I sent you a friend request that included my full name.
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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7/1/2014 10:26:15 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 10:18:52 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:15:51 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:12:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:10:50 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:05:29 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!

Frankly, if I were grading poems, I would only give this one an acceptable score if the writer was under 12 years old. If you want to use it, go right ahead, but I don't see why you would want to.

Thankyou for allowing me to use your poem,
and I don't think someone that was 12 years old could even think of writing a poem like this! you should take more pride in your work! Although you may not see it as any good, others would love to be able to write poems like this.

Take myself for example, the best piece of writing I have done is a fifty word poem and I can't even remember how it goes! but it got graded a c-.

Do you need my full name or something, in order to cite it for some godforsaken reason?

No I'll just use you DDO username and cite where I got it from, unless you would like you full name on it and some other stuff!

I sent you a friend request that included my full name.

Thankyou for this!
How come when I hit review it sometimes adds my post without me clicking add post?
Does this happen to other people?

#LEARN TO SPEAK UP
#Cause I can
Learn to use emoticons DDO.
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7/1/2014 10:40:28 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 10:26:15 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:18:52 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:15:51 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:12:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:10:50 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:05:29 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!

Frankly, if I were grading poems, I would only give this one an acceptable score if the writer was under 12 years old. If you want to use it, go right ahead, but I don't see why you would want to.

Thankyou for allowing me to use your poem,
and I don't think someone that was 12 years old could even think of writing a poem like this! you should take more pride in your work! Although you may not see it as any good, others would love to be able to write poems like this.

Take myself for example, the best piece of writing I have done is a fifty word poem and I can't even remember how it goes! but it got graded a c-.

Do you need my full name or something, in order to cite it for some godforsaken reason?

No I'll just use you DDO username and cite where I got it from, unless you would like you full name on it and some other stuff!

I sent you a friend request that included my full name.

Thankyou for this!

Be sure to tell me how badly you did on the assignment.
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush
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7/2/2014 6:20:30 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/1/2014 10:40:28 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:26:15 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:18:52 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:15:51 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:12:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:10:50 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:05:29 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!

Frankly, if I were grading poems, I would only give this one an acceptable score if the writer was under 12 years old. If you want to use it, go right ahead, but I don't see why you would want to.

Thankyou for allowing me to use your poem,
and I don't think someone that was 12 years old could even think of writing a poem like this! you should take more pride in your work! Although you may not see it as any good, others would love to be able to write poems like this.

Take myself for example, the best piece of writing I have done is a fifty word poem and I can't even remember how it goes! but it got graded a c-.

Do you need my full name or something, in order to cite it for some godforsaken reason?

No I'll just use you DDO username and cite where I got it from, unless you would like you full name on it and some other stuff!

I sent you a friend request that included my full name.

Thankyou for this!

Be sure to tell me how badly you did on the assignment.

I haven't handed my assignment up yet but I asked my teacher to grade the poem itself using year 12 criteria and she said it would be a B-.
How come when I hit review it sometimes adds my post without me clicking add post?
Does this happen to other people?

#LEARN TO SPEAK UP
#Cause I can
Learn to use emoticons DDO.
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7/2/2014 6:39:36 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 7/2/2014 6:20:30 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:40:28 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:26:15 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:18:52 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:15:51 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:12:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:10:50 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 10:05:29 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:59:57 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:55:59 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
At 7/1/2014 9:54:05 PM, Krieg01 wrote:
At 6/28/2014 11:36:50 PM, bossyburrito wrote:
A formal declaration of love for the user known as Zarroette:

As the tides go in
As the tides go out
So many unexplainable things
Often happen, without a doubt -
Like the rising of the sun
Like the setting of the moon
These cyclical cycles
Cycle much as the wheels of a bicycle
We all give these things grand praise
Without them, a noose would be both wanted and needed, given how these are our main sources of happiness and joy in this otherwise bleak and horrid world.
Much like the above, and much different
Is a young girl, who stands out among the rest of the children
This girl has a certain aura
Once you are caught in it, it's hard to
Imagine living without her

Living without her would be much the same
As living without the moon, the clouds, and the rain -
We would have no snow, ice, or hail
Her being gone would take the fire, as well
The fire that burns within each one of us
The fire that inspires us
The fire of life is put out when she's gone
But if she is around, it won't be long
It will shortly be burning, in a grand manner
It will only be satisfied under one condition:
If I ask for this girl's hand above all the competition

So hear my cries, hear my sorrows
For the horror of a refusal would be too much to bear
Listen closely to what I have to say
We can get married some time in the month of May
The day will be warm, the birds flying
It will be perfect, if I thought anything else I would be most certainly lying
Please, I beg of you - consider this deeply
For you are held deep within my heart dearly
The bliss of being near you to me is to be seen quite clearly
It's much more than a trivial matter, not merely
Some fling, destined to end quickly
A life can be built, a life of grandeur
And, if you accept, that fire will continue to burn forever.

Wow this is brilliant, do you mind if I use this as inspiration for my English task with full compliments to you as you wrote it!

Please don't - I literally wrote this in 15 minutes as a joke (though I still love you, Zarroette - don't take that the wrong way!) with no intention of making anything worthwhile. I think that it's a talentless piece of work that has only one saving grace - the absurdity of it and the comedy that can be drawn from that absurdity.

I wont use it unless I get your consent!
But again it is a really nice piece of work, you should be proud of this!

Frankly, if I were grading poems, I would only give this one an acceptable score if the writer was under 12 years old. If you want to use it, go right ahead, but I don't see why you would want to.

Thankyou for allowing me to use your poem,
and I don't think someone that was 12 years old could even think of writing a poem like this! you should take more pride in your work! Although you may not see it as any good, others would love to be able to write poems like this.

Take myself for example, the best piece of writing I have done is a fifty word poem and I can't even remember how it goes! but it got graded a c-.

Do you need my full name or something, in order to cite it for some godforsaken reason?

No I'll just use you DDO username and cite where I got it from, unless you would like you full name on it and some other stuff!

I sent you a friend request that included my full name.

Thankyou for this!

Be sure to tell me how badly you did on the assignment.

I haven't handed my assignment up yet but I asked my teacher to grade the poem itself using year 12 criteria and she said it would be a B-.

If that's a B- to your teacher, she's extremely generous. I would literally be ashamed to attach my name to this if I had to have someone read it in a serious way.
#UnbanTheMadman

"Some will sell their dreams for small desires
Or lose the race to rats
Get caught in ticking traps
And start to dream of somewhere
To relax their restless flight
Somewhere out of a memory of lighted streets on quiet nights..."

~ Rush