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Ajabi
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10/7/2014 11:56:12 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
I realize there are much finer works (GCL, Blade-of-Truth, ocult_de_logica) to name a few, but this poem does mean a great deal to me so I thought I would share it.

The soft whisper from Despair,
rings loudly in my ears,
that gentle ere approaching silence
shocks out, in my soul, violence

This heart of mine that pumped,
was in one large bosom cupped,
and when mine heart that bosom met
hope turned to glory, as God's plan did set

Autumn seemed spring, salt water sweet wine
'tis love was grander than any lustful shrine
Alas our Ide (reference: Julius Caesar) did come, it came all too soon
merriment turned to sorrow, thick blood became water

Now I lament, why did it ever come to pass
that one evergreen fell, all sand, no grass
Still my heart, it wants this love to return
'tis foolishness, truly shall I never this learn?

P I know it has a lot of errors but I wrote it in 14 minutes, so poo! :P

Dont analyze it too deeply folks :P Hahaha <3 :P I have another cheerful poem but it would ruin the mood right now. Also frankly I am uncomfortable of posting the poem about my erotic dreams with my dream person. :P Needless to say they are sexier than anything created :'( LOL
NiamC
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10/7/2014 4:43:54 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/7/2014 11:56:12 AM, Ajabi wrote:

hope turned to glory, as God's plan did set

This is my favourite line ^.^
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ESocialBookworm
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10/7/2014 4:47:36 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/7/2014 11:56:12 AM, Ajabi wrote:
Beautiful. great job.

P I know it has a lot of errors but I wrote it in 14 minutes, so poo! :P

Dont analyze it too deeply folks :P Hahaha <3 :P I have another cheerful poem but it would ruin the mood right now. Also frankly I am uncomfortable of posting the poem about my erotic dreams with my dream person. :P Needless to say they are sexier than anything created :'( LOL

Wut?
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Defro
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10/7/2014 9:54:10 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/7/2014 11:56:12 AM, Ajabi wrote:
I realize there are much finer works (GCL, Blade-of-Truth, ocult_de_logica) to name a few, but this poem does mean a great deal to me so I thought I would share it.

The soft whisper from Despair,
rings loudly in my ears,
that gentle ere approaching silence
shocks out, in my soul, violence

This heart of mine that pumped,
was in one large bosom cupped,
and when mine heart that bosom met
hope turned to glory, as God's plan did set

Autumn seemed spring, salt water sweet wine
'tis love was grander than any lustful shrine
Alas our Ide (reference: Julius Caesar) did come, it came all too soon
merriment turned to sorrow, thick blood became water

Now I lament, why did it ever come to pass
that one evergreen fell, all sand, no grass
Still my heart, it wants this love to return
'tis foolishness, truly shall I never this learn?

P I know it has a lot of errors but I wrote it in 14 minutes, so poo! :P

Dont analyze it too deeply folks :P Hahaha <3 :P I have another cheerful poem but it would ruin the mood right now. Also frankly I am uncomfortable of posting the poem about my erotic dreams with my dream person. :P Needless to say they are sexier than anything created :'( LOL

If I make a beat to this, will you rap to it?
Defro
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10/7/2014 9:55:41 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/7/2014 11:56:12 AM, Ajabi wrote:
I realize there are much finer works (GCL, Blade-of-Truth, ocult_de_logica) to name a few, but this poem does mean a great deal to me so I thought I would share it.

The soft whisper from Despair,
rings loudly in my ears,
that gentle ere approaching silence
shocks out, in my soul, violence

This heart of mine that pumped,
was in one large bosom cupped,
and when mine heart that bosom met
hope turned to glory, as God's plan did set

Autumn seemed spring, salt water sweet wine
'tis love was grander than any lustful shrine
Alas our Ide (reference: Julius Caesar) did come, it came all too soon
merriment turned to sorrow, thick blood became water

Now I lament, why did it ever come to pass
that one evergreen fell, all sand, no grass
Still my heart, it wants this love to return
'tis foolishness, truly shall I never this learn?

P I know it has a lot of errors but I wrote it in 14 minutes, so poo! :P

Dont analyze it too deeply folks :P Hahaha <3 :P I have another cheerful poem but it would ruin the mood right now. Also frankly I am uncomfortable of posting the poem about my erotic dreams with my dream person. :P Needless to say they are sexier than anything created :'( LOL

If I give you a beat, will you rap this poem to it?
Ajabi
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10/7/2014 11:27:01 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/7/2014 4:47:36 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 10/7/2014 11:56:12 AM, Ajabi wrote:
Beautiful. great job.

P I know it has a lot of errors but I wrote it in 14 minutes, so poo! :P

Dont analyze it too deeply folks :P Hahaha <3 :P I have another cheerful poem but it would ruin the mood right now. Also frankly I am uncomfortable of posting the poem about my erotic dreams with my dream person. :P Needless to say they are sexier than anything created :'( LOL

Wut?

It has two heads, six hands, 3 eyes. A sexy piece, but it may scare others.
Ajabi
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10/7/2014 11:27:30 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/7/2014 9:55:41 PM, Defro wrote:
At 10/7/2014 11:56:12 AM, Ajabi wrote:
I realize there are much finer works (GCL, Blade-of-Truth, ocult_de_logica) to name a few, but this poem does mean a great deal to me so I thought I would share it.

The soft whisper from Despair,
rings loudly in my ears,
that gentle ere approaching silence
shocks out, in my soul, violence

This heart of mine that pumped,
was in one large bosom cupped,
and when mine heart that bosom met
hope turned to glory, as God's plan did set

Autumn seemed spring, salt water sweet wine
'tis love was grander than any lustful shrine
Alas our Ide (reference: Julius Caesar) did come, it came all too soon
merriment turned to sorrow, thick blood became water

Now I lament, why did it ever come to pass
that one evergreen fell, all sand, no grass
Still my heart, it wants this love to return
'tis foolishness, truly shall I never this learn?

P I know it has a lot of errors but I wrote it in 14 minutes, so poo! :P

Dont analyze it too deeply folks :P Hahaha <3 :P I have another cheerful poem but it would ruin the mood right now. Also frankly I am uncomfortable of posting the poem about my erotic dreams with my dream person. :P Needless to say they are sexier than anything created :'( LOL

If I give you a beat, will you rap this poem to it?

umm sure?
Ajabi
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10/7/2014 11:34:45 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/7/2014 4:43:54 PM, NiamC wrote:
At 10/7/2014 11:56:12 AM, Ajabi wrote:

hope turned to glory, as God's plan did set

This is my favourite line ^.^

lol thanks again Niam ;)
Ajabi
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10/8/2014 1:16:30 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/8/2014 12:43:23 AM, Defro wrote:
At 10/7/2014 11:27:30 PM, Ajabi wrote:

umm sure?

Alright you promised. Expect to rap this in a week.

Hai hai hai. Only if you, and/or someone else does it alongside so I dont sound that bad.
Defro
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10/8/2014 1:24:07 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/8/2014 1:16:30 AM, Ajabi wrote:
At 10/8/2014 12:43:23 AM, Defro wrote:
At 10/7/2014 11:27:30 PM, Ajabi wrote:

umm sure?

Alright you promised. Expect to rap this in a week.

Hai hai hai. Only if you, and/or someone else does it alongside so I dont sound that bad.

Ok, I'll tell Dennybug to do it with you
Ajabi
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10/8/2014 1:25:09 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/8/2014 1:24:07 AM, Defro wrote:
At 10/8/2014 1:16:30 AM, Ajabi wrote:
At 10/8/2014 12:43:23 AM, Defro wrote:
At 10/7/2014 11:27:30 PM, Ajabi wrote:

umm sure?

Alright you promised. Expect to rap this in a week.

Hai hai hai. Only if you, and/or someone else does it alongside so I dont sound that bad.

Ok, I'll tell Dennybug to do it with you

-_- fine ill do it myself -_-
Defro
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10/8/2014 10:51:25 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/8/2014 1:25:09 AM, Ajabi wrote:
At 10/8/2014 1:24:07 AM, Defro wrote:
At 10/8/2014 1:16:30 AM, Ajabi wrote:
At 10/8/2014 12:43:23 AM, Defro wrote:
At 10/7/2014 11:27:30 PM, Ajabi wrote:

umm sure?

Alright you promised. Expect to rap this in a week.

Hai hai hai. Only if you, and/or someone else does it alongside so I dont sound that bad.

Ok, I'll tell Dennybug to do it with you

-_- fine ill do it myself -_-

Do it on a hangout or something and record it.
Blade-of-Truth
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10/22/2014 8:36:48 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/7/2014 11:56:12 AM, Ajabi wrote:
I realize there are much finer works (GCL, Blade-of-Truth, ocult_de_logica) to name a few, but this poem does mean a great deal to me so I thought I would share it.

The soft whisper from Despair,
rings loudly in my ears,
that gentle ere approaching silence
shocks out, in my soul, violence

This heart of mine that pumped,
was in one large bosom cupped,
and when mine heart that bosom met
hope turned to glory, as God's plan did set

Autumn seemed spring, salt water sweet wine
'tis love was grander than any lustful shrine
Alas our Ide (reference: Julius Caesar) did come, it came all too soon
merriment turned to sorrow, thick blood became water

Now I lament, why did it ever come to pass
that one evergreen fell, all sand, no grass
Still my heart, it wants this love to return
'tis foolishness, truly shall I never this learn?

P I know it has a lot of errors but I wrote it in 14 minutes, so poo! :P

Dont analyze it too deeply folks :P Hahaha <3 :P I have another cheerful poem but it would ruin the mood right now. Also frankly I am uncomfortable of posting the poem about my erotic dreams with my dream person. :P Needless to say they are sexier than anything created :'( LOL

omgosh I can't believe I missed this. Good job Ajabi - it was a really good poem.
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