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Adam_Godzilla
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10/22/2014 9:09:10 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
A little poem/string of words. Not as good as Ajab's probs. But I wrote it from somewhere deep within.

Sometimes I can close my eyes
And other times I can't
What is the point I ask
When the world is filled with cries

Everyone is a stranger
Don't trust anyone
Those eyes so remote
It screams danger

Burn my eyes
Let me unsee
The unseeable
Because everyhing I love
Dies
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10/22/2014 9:11:11 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
Are you okay, man?
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10/22/2014 11:02:03 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/22/2014 9:09:10 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
A little poem/string of words. Not as good as Ajab's probs. But I wrote it from somewhere deep within.

Sometimes I can close my eyes
And other times I can't
What is the point I ask
When the world is filled with cries

Everyone is a stranger
Don't trust anyone
Those eyes so remote
It screams danger

Burn my eyes
Let me unsee
The unseeable
Because everyhing I love
Dies

Excellent writing man. Very deep and emotional. I can feel the strings, and tears beating against a thin layer of skin, threatening to escape.
You write really well, and from the heart. <3

If you ever wanna talk, PM me.
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10/22/2014 11:57:48 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/22/2014 9:11:11 PM, thett3 wrote:
Are you okay, man?

Lol yes. It doesnt actually reflect my emotional state. It came from inspiration.
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Adam_Godzilla
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10/22/2014 11:59:14 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/22/2014 11:02:03 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 10/22/2014 9:09:10 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
A little poem/string of words. Not as good as Ajab's probs. But I wrote it from somewhere deep within.

Sometimes I can close my eyes
And other times I can't
What is the point I ask
When the world is filled with cries

Everyone is a stranger
Don't trust anyone
Those eyes so remote
It screams danger

Burn my eyes
Let me unsee
The unseeable
Because everyhing I love
Dies

Excellent writing man. Very deep and emotional. I can feel the strings, and tears beating against a thin layer of skin, threatening to escape.
You write really well, and from the heart. <3

If you ever wanna talk, PM me.

Haha. Thank you. It doesnt actually show my emotional state. It comes more from inspiration.
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Adam_Godzilla
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10/23/2014 12:00:49 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
I'm fine guys. The poem is more of an inspiration than my actual thoughts.
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10/23/2014 11:25:07 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/23/2014 12:00:49 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
I'm fine guys. The poem is more of an inspiration than my actual thoughts.

I loved your poem. Very eliquately written. Deep!
Didn't know you were a poet? You should join the DDO Poetry Club :)
Ahem, btw, this is GCL/Marie. in case you didn't notice lol :P
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10/24/2014 12:54:21 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/23/2014 11:25:07 PM, ElCorazonAma wrote:
At 10/23/2014 12:00:49 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
I'm fine guys. The poem is more of an inspiration than my actual thoughts.

I loved your poem. Very eliquately written. Deep!
Didn't know you were a poet? You should join the DDO Poetry Club :)
Ahem, btw, this is GCL/Marie. in case you didn't notice lol :P

Marie!!!!!
I had no idea. . .

That sounds awesome. Can you send me a link?
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ElCorazonAma
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10/24/2014 1:19:10 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/24/2014 12:54:21 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/23/2014 11:25:07 PM, ElCorazonAma wrote:
At 10/23/2014 12:00:49 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
I'm fine guys. The poem is more of an inspiration than my actual thoughts.

I loved your poem. Very eliquately written. Deep!
Didn't know you were a poet? You should join the DDO Poetry Club :)
Ahem, btw, this is GCL/Marie. in case you didn't notice lol :P

Marie!!!!!
I had no idea. . .

That sounds awesome. Can you send me a link?

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10/24/2014 2:11:32 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/24/2014 1:19:10 AM, ElCorazonAma wrote:
At 10/24/2014 12:54:21 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/23/2014 11:25:07 PM, ElCorazonAma wrote:
At 10/23/2014 12:00:49 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
I'm fine guys. The poem is more of an inspiration than my actual thoughts.

I loved your poem. Very eliquately written. Deep!
Didn't know you were a poet? You should join the DDO Poetry Club :)
Ahem, btw, this is GCL/Marie. in case you didn't notice lol :P

Marie!!!!!
I had no idea. . .

That sounds awesome. Can you send me a link?

http://www.debate.org...
I wish to join
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ElCorazonAma
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10/24/2014 2:29:07 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/24/2014 2:11:32 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/24/2014 1:19:10 AM, ElCorazonAma wrote:
At 10/24/2014 12:54:21 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
At 10/23/2014 11:25:07 PM, ElCorazonAma wrote:
At 10/23/2014 12:00:49 AM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
I'm fine guys. The poem is more of an inspiration than my actual thoughts.

I loved your poem. Very eliquately written. Deep!
Didn't know you were a poet? You should join the DDO Poetry Club :)
Ahem, btw, this is GCL/Marie. in case you didn't notice lol :P

Marie!!!!!
I had no idea. . .

That sounds awesome. Can you send me a link?

http://www.debate.org...
I wish to join
Well post away :)
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10/24/2014 8:41:50 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
Correction, this is a little poem:

the waves tear me asunder
accept peacefully
creation begins anew
My work here is, finally, done.
Adam_Godzilla
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10/24/2014 8:49:41 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/24/2014 8:41:50 AM, Khaos_Mage wrote:
Correction, this is a little poem:

the waves tear me asunder
accept peacefully
creation begins anew

cool.
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10/24/2014 10:48:31 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/22/2014 9:09:10 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
A little poem/string of words. Not as good as Ajab's probs. But I wrote it from somewhere deep within.

Sometimes I can close my eyes
And other times I can't
What is the point I ask
When the world is filled with cries

Everyone is a stranger
Don't trust anyone
Those eyes so remote
It screams danger

Burn my eyes
Let me unsee
The unseeable
Because everyhing I love
Dies

nicely done :)
Adam_Godzilla
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10/24/2014 7:31:30 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/24/2014 9:21:11 AM, 9spaceking wrote:
great poem adam

Thanks my friend.
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Adam_Godzilla
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10/24/2014 7:32:46 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 10/24/2014 10:48:31 AM, Dennybug wrote:
At 10/22/2014 9:09:10 PM, Adam_Godzilla wrote:
A little poem/string of words. Not as good as Ajab's probs. But I wrote it from somewhere deep within.

Sometimes I can close my eyes
And other times I can't
What is the point I ask
When the world is filled with cries

Everyone is a stranger
Don't trust anyone
Those eyes so remote
It screams danger

Burn my eyes
Let me unsee
The unseeable
Because everyhing I love
Dies

nicely done :)

Denny! Long time no see!

And thank you.
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