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A Confession!

Ajabi
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1/14/2015 6:24:13 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
This is written in the traditional Persian style of poetry, integrated into English. I know its not that good, but yesterday I did something very stupid which hurt a lot of people I love. It has taught me a very good lesson, and this poem embodies my emotion in the after period. It is my repentance, and this is what brought me peace.

Ajab repent, you have forgotten yourself,
Ajab renounce it, it is the fire of Hell,
You say it is beauty, that lovely ruby red,
Ajab denounce it, recall what Virgil said.

Ajab look in the mirror, you shall not find it,
Ajab you are without Soul, without Heart, without wit!
You say it is peaceful, like the extending ocean,
Ajab use caution, you are under the power of a potion!

Ajab you stood tall, was it all a play?
Ajab you liar! Is there ever any truth to what you say?
You say with teared eyes that you are still you,
Ajab you mock yourself, it is Allah Hu Allah Hu[1]

Ajab where is redemption, for you, to be found?
Ajab you speak words, but the words remain sounds,
You say that your heart was not in its place,
Ajab there is another who is wearing your face!

[1] Allah Hu means Allah [God] is Everything, keeping in mind the traditional Sufi thought that "I" am nothing. Muslims and religious people will get this.

I was very distraught yesterday, and I'm grateful I had friends to support me at that time. I have learnt to trust myself less, and this is certainly a lesson to show me I am not as high and mighty as I thought. I can always pretend I'm better, in the end I'm not.

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Wylted
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1/14/2015 1:15:46 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
It's not called a confession it's called coming out of the closet. The word confession insinuates you did something wrong, and you didn't.

It's okay, we love you.
ESocialBookworm
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1/14/2015 4:49:34 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/14/2015 6:24:13 AM, Ajabi wrote:

Whatever you do or did, everyone makes mistakes, and I'm sure they have it in their hearts to forgive you, if you really do think what you did was wrong.

I <3 u hun & always will.
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.
Ajabi
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1/15/2015 4:49:36 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/14/2015 1:15:46 PM, Wylted wrote:
It's not called a confession it's called coming out of the closet. The word confession insinuates you did something wrong, and you didn't.

It's okay, we love you.

>.> Just praise the poem and move along.
Ajabi
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1/15/2015 4:49:54 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/14/2015 4:49:34 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 1/14/2015 6:24:13 AM, Ajabi wrote:

Whatever you do or did, everyone makes mistakes, and I'm sure they have it in their hearts to forgive you, if you really do think what you did was wrong.

I <3 u hun & always will.

Thanks Annie <3
Wylted
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1/15/2015 6:00:13 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/15/2015 4:49:36 AM, Ajabi wrote:
At 1/14/2015 1:15:46 PM, Wylted wrote:
It's not called a confession it's called coming out of the closet. The word confession insinuates you did something wrong, and you didn't.

It's okay, we love you.

>.> Just praise the poem and move along.

Excellent poem.
ESocialBookworm
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1/15/2015 2:08:51 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 1/15/2015 4:49:54 AM, Ajabi wrote:
At 1/14/2015 4:49:34 PM, ESocialBookworm wrote:
At 1/14/2015 6:24:13 AM, Ajabi wrote:

Whatever you do or did, everyone makes mistakes, and I'm sure they have it in their hearts to forgive you, if you really do think what you did was wrong.

I <3 u hun & always will.

Thanks Annie <3

<3
Solonkr~
I don't care about whether an ideology is "necessary" or not,
I care about how to solve problems,
which is what everyone else should also care about.

Ken~
In essence, the world is fucked up and you can either ignore it, become cynical or bitter about it.

Me~
"BAILEY + SOLON = SAILEY
MY SHIP SAILEY MUST SAIL"

SCREW THAT SHIZ #BANNIE = BAILEY & ANNIE

P.S. Shipped Sailey before it was cannon bitches.