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Cody_Franklin
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5/30/2015 8:38:22 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
Hey, so, I've got this book that I'm working on, and there is a snippet I've selected that I was hoping to get some feedback on. I can't judge my own writing style terribly well (except with respect to internal stylistic consistency), so, if anyone would be interested in reading about 5 pages/2,000 words, let me know. As a warning, it's very NSFW, so readers would preferably be possessed of relatively little sensitivity to explicit content.
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5/30/2015 8:45:11 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
I would help, but unfortunately, I've still got a lot to read on my plate.

You could ask bsh and Endark, but I think they might be busy too.
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5/30/2015 9:28:11 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/30/2015 8:38:22 PM, Cody_Franklin wrote:
Hey, so, I've got this book that I'm working on, and there is a snippet I've selected that I was hoping to get some feedback on. I can't judge my own writing style terribly well (except with respect to internal stylistic consistency), so, if anyone would be interested in reading about 5 pages/2,000 words, let me know. As a warning, it's very NSFW, so readers would preferably be possessed of relatively little sensitivity to explicit content.

Send it to me in a PM. I'd be happy to offer feedback when I can get around to it.
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5/30/2015 9:40:28 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/30/2015 8:38:22 PM, Cody_Franklin wrote:
Hey, so, I've got this book that I'm working on, and there is a snippet I've selected that I was hoping to get some feedback on. I can't judge my own writing style terribly well (except with respect to internal stylistic consistency), so, if anyone would be interested in reading about 5 pages/2,000 words, let me know. As a warning, it's very NSFW, so readers would preferably be possessed of relatively little sensitivity to explicit content.

Define "very".
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5/30/2015 9:45:51 PM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/30/2015 8:38:22 PM, Cody_Franklin wrote:
Hey, so, I've got this book that I'm working on, and there is a snippet I've selected that I was hoping to get some feedback on. I can't judge my own writing style terribly well (except with respect to internal stylistic consistency), so, if anyone would be interested in reading about 5 pages/2,000 words, let me know. As a warning, it's very NSFW, so readers would preferably be possessed of relatively little sensitivity to explicit content.

with finals i can probably read it, i'm already studied up for all my tests
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5/31/2015 12:27:01 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/30/2015 8:38:22 PM, Cody_Franklin wrote:
Hey, so, I've got this book that I'm working on, and there is a snippet I've selected that I was hoping to get some feedback on. I can't judge my own writing style terribly well (except with respect to internal stylistic consistency), so, if anyone would be interested in reading about 5 pages/2,000 words, let me know. As a warning, it's very NSFW, so readers would preferably be possessed of relatively little sensitivity to explicit content.

I'd be happy to read it if you wanted. Did you want it copy edited, too?
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5/31/2015 12:45:05 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/30/2015 8:38:22 PM, Cody_Franklin wrote:
Hey, so, I've got this book that I'm working on, and there is a snippet I've selected that I was hoping to get some feedback on. I can't judge my own writing style terribly well (except with respect to internal stylistic consistency), so, if anyone would be interested in reading about 5 pages/2,000 words, let me know. As a warning, it's very NSFW, so readers would preferably be possessed of relatively little sensitivity to explicit content.

I'd like to see it.
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5/31/2015 1:24:05 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/30/2015 8:38:22 PM, Cody_Franklin wrote:
Hey, so, I've got this book that I'm working on, and there is a snippet I've selected that I was hoping to get some feedback on. I can't judge my own writing style terribly well (except with respect to internal stylistic consistency), so, if anyone would be interested in reading about 5 pages/2,000 words, let me know. As a warning, it's very NSFW, so readers would preferably be possessed of relatively little sensitivity to explicit content.

Send me a PM.
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5/31/2015 2:20:57 AM
Posted: 1 year ago
At 5/30/2015 8:38:22 PM, Cody_Franklin wrote:
Hey, so, I've got this book that I'm working on, and there is a snippet I've selected that I was hoping to get some feedback on. I can't judge my own writing style terribly well (except with respect to internal stylistic consistency), so, if anyone would be interested in reading about 5 pages/2,000 words, let me know. As a warning, it's very NSFW, so readers would preferably be possessed of relatively little sensitivity to explicit content.

I can check it out sometime over the next week.
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