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tajshar2k
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3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,
Vaarka
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3/11/2016 1:42:46 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,

How long is said essay? If I can do it in 10 minutes then I can probably try to help.
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3/11/2016 1:49:03 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 3/11/2016 1:42:46 AM, Vaarka wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,

How long is said essay? If I can do it in 10 minutes then I can probably try to help.

It's a 1136 words... Is that too much?
Vaarka
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3/11/2016 1:49:35 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 3/11/2016 1:49:03 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:42:46 AM, Vaarka wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,

How long is said essay? If I can do it in 10 minutes then I can probably try to help.

It's a 1136 words... Is that too much?

Nah, that's alright
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"I bet you're thinking right now 'haha I'm a genius'. well you're not" - Valkrin

"You're too young to be so wise, mate. Tone it down a little." - Devilry

*puffs bubble pipe*
tajshar2k
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3/11/2016 1:54:49 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 3/11/2016 1:49:35 AM, Vaarka wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:49:03 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:42:46 AM, Vaarka wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,

How long is said essay? If I can do it in 10 minutes then I can probably try to help.

It's a 1136 words... Is that too much?

Nah, that's alright

P.Med you. Thanks for all the help.
Vaarka
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3/11/2016 2:03:22 AM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 3/11/2016 1:54:49 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:49:35 AM, Vaarka wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:49:03 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:42:46 AM, Vaarka wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,

How long is said essay? If I can do it in 10 minutes then I can probably try to help.

It's a 1136 words... Is that too much?

Nah, that's alright

P.Med you. Thanks for all the help.

No problem, I'm reading now.
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"You're too young to be so wise, mate. Tone it down a little." - Devilry

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3/11/2016 2:50:22 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,

Well I guess I'm too late for that.
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3/11/2016 3:20:50 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 3/11/2016 2:50:22 PM, lannan13 wrote:
At 3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,

Well I guess I'm too late for that.

Lol
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"You're too young to be so wise, mate. Tone it down a little." - Devilry

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3/11/2016 9:06:36 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,

I would have... if I had seen it... Sorry bro
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3/11/2016 10:05:54 PM
Posted: 2 years ago
At 3/11/2016 1:31:15 AM, tajshar2k wrote:
Can somebody look over my essay and check it for grammar and give feedback?

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I need to email it before 12:00 Am Eastern Time, so immediate help is needed.

P.M me if you want to help
Thanks,

You could use grammarly
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