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Dakota-Hiltzman
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2/7/2011 11:42:56 PM
Posted: 5 years ago
Rules:
1. no profanity, or obscene language
2. no cheating or repeating a previously recited verse

Procedure:
I will start out the game in this post, and each successive comment must add a stanza to the poem while still keeping it a sentient poem.

meaning that
"we laid down in the shade
we based out in the sun
we had a big parade
we all had lots of fun"

would not be an appropriate response to,

"I jumped into the dark hole
it was bout' half past eight
I can't come out there's a toll
they put me here as bait"

here's to a fun game!

and the starting stanza is....

My mother bought me a new pillow, this pillow's name is fred.
resembling a weeping willow, it just lies on my bed.
this pillow is the color brown, just like the tree forementioned.
she bought it in emboidery town, it was made by her good friend Kinned.
InsertNameHere
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2/7/2011 11:53:26 PM
Posted: 5 years ago
My mother bought me a new pillow, this pillow's name is fred.
resembling a weeping willow, it just lies on my bed.
this pillow is the color brown, just like the tree forementioned.
she bought it in emboidery town, it was made by her good friend Kinned.

everynight before going to sleep I begin to think
what a good friend this pillow has become
although sometimes I wish it was more pink
being dark coloured is nice too, just like a plum
CosmicAlfonzo
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2/8/2011 7:48:24 PM
Posted: 5 years ago
At 2/7/2011 11:53:26 PM, InsertNameHere wrote:
My mother bought me a new pillow, this pillow's name is fred.
resembling a weeping willow, it just lies on my bed.
this pillow is the color brown, just like the tree forementioned.
she bought it in emboidery town, it was made by her good friend Kinned.

everynight before going to sleep I begin to think
what a good friend this pillow has become
although sometimes I wish it was more pink
being dark coloured is nice too, just like a plum

When I go to sleep, my head begins to melt
I swear it eats my brain, I wake up with a welt
This pillow stares at me, its turd shade thickens
I think my mother bought it from the aging local Wiccans
Official "High Priest of Secular Affairs and Transient Distributor of Sonic Apple Seeds relating to the Reptilian Division of Paperwork Immoliation" of The FREEDO Bureaucracy, a DDO branch of the Erisian Front, a subdivision of the Discordian Back, a Limb of the Illuminatian Cosmic Utensil Corp
SuperRobotWars
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2/8/2011 8:10:17 PM
Posted: 5 years ago
The wind
The wind
The oh so glorious wind
The breeze that is blowing
Swaying the trees
All over the lands that be
Oh to see
The wind
The wind
Minister Of Trolling
: At 12/6/2011 2:21:41 PM, badger wrote:
: ugly people should beat beautiful people ugly. simple! you'd be killing two birds with the one stone... women like violent men and you're making yourself more attractive, relatively. i met a blonde dude who was prettier than me not so long ago. he's not so pretty now! ha!
:
: ...and well, he wasn't really prettier than me. he just had nice hair.
InsertNameHere
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2/8/2011 8:18:35 PM
Posted: 5 years ago
At 2/8/2011 8:10:17 PM, SuperRobotWars wrote:
The wind
The wind
The oh so glorious wind
The breeze that is blowing
Swaying the trees
All over the lands that be
Oh to see
The wind
The wind

Fail. Did you not read the first post?
SuperRobotWars
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2/8/2011 8:24:02 PM
Posted: 5 years ago
At 2/8/2011 8:18:35 PM, InsertNameHere wrote:
At 2/8/2011 8:10:17 PM, SuperRobotWars wrote:
The wind
The wind
The oh so glorious wind
The breeze that is blowing
Swaying the trees
All over the lands that be
Oh to see
The wind
The wind

Fail. Did you not read the first post?

I am very sorry I did not read it till after I posted :(
Minister Of Trolling
: At 12/6/2011 2:21:41 PM, badger wrote:
: ugly people should beat beautiful people ugly. simple! you'd be killing two birds with the one stone... women like violent men and you're making yourself more attractive, relatively. i met a blonde dude who was prettier than me not so long ago. he's not so pretty now! ha!
:
: ...and well, he wasn't really prettier than me. he just had nice hair.
badger
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2/9/2011 11:48:05 AM
Posted: 5 years ago
At 2/8/2011 7:48:24 PM, CosmicAlfonzo wrote:
At 2/7/2011 11:53:26 PM, InsertNameHere wrote:
My mother bought me a new pillow, this pillow's name is fred.
resembling a weeping willow, it just lies on my bed.
this pillow is the color brown, just like the tree forementioned.
she bought it in emboidery town, it was made by her good friend Kinned.

everynight before going to sleep I begin to think
what a good friend this pillow has become
although sometimes I wish it was more pink
being dark coloured is nice too, just like a plum

When I go to sleep, my head begins to melt
I swear it eats my brain, I wake up with a welt
This pillow stares at me, its turd shade thickens
I think my mother bought it from the aging local Wiccans

so i shot that motherfvcker!
i shot him in the arse..
it was class..
...then i went to mass
and got anally raped by a priest..
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