Lyrical Games #4 (Alliteration Series #1 only with Letters B, G, R, S, & W)
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| Started: | 8/23/2014 | Category: | Miscellaneous | ||
| Updated: | 7 years ago | Status: | Post Voting Period | ||
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 Pro Qualifications: Must have 10 or more debates. Prefer 18 years or older unless your win percentile is 80%+ Rules: 1. Miscellaneous Lyrics a. religion, sex, money, women, fame, yourself, insults, put downs, censored profanity *(limit 5 per verse as to not offend most readers) b. original compositions 2. up to 16 bars TWO ROUNDS ONLY 3. Con begins R1 with his First Verse 4. Judges you will be grading which opponent you clearly understood the most AND/OR which one had the most entertaining lyrical presentation. This is a test of lyrical proficiency & superiority. 2 verses, 16 bars each. If you cannot establish yourself as lyrically dominant with an industry standard of two 16 bars, then this debate is too complex for you. Lyrical Masters don't need 3, 4, & 5 rounds to "prove" they are dominant wordsmiths. Now enter Alliteration Series #1.  Con Breakin' bags as i'm bloggin' bout beggin' with bangins Bass boomin', broken brooms, and unpaid billins God givin' as i'm grinnin' grippin' the good as it glistens Grateful i gotta a gate full of gleanin' gremlins all givens Gettin' it till i'm greedy n' gladly goudin' great griffons Gougin' out goofy groupies, grabbin' goodies n' gibbons Rememberin' as i reflect, revise, repent, n' recognize, on to remissions Rhymatically reachin' for recons n' ruthlessly request reconditions Rheumatically runnin' from ruthless requisitions n' recycled repetitions Realistically really ruinin' repugnant reproven ruckus from retransmissions Slowly slaughterin' Shadow sadistically, get into submissions Seducin' slayers into sexually stringent slick n' sick superstitions Systematically slappin' sorrows from surrealistic n' silly seditions Significantly slammin' slangin' singin' n' sinnin, screamin' suppositions Women whisperin' wishin' i would welcome em well with wholesome wordplay |
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Pro Whimsical weather wrecked my weed-smokin' weekend so I wrote a war game wilder than the World of Warcraft Wandering werewolf-witches welding witchcraft wage warfare with wayward Welsh warlocks on a warpath Got the goofy gaming idea from a genteel, gymnastic GED-gained Girl Scout named Ginny Genie Gypsy She grew up in Germany garnering good grades despite gaining global glamor as a gangster named Gutsy She socializes on Saturdays with scandalous, schizophrenic, syphilis-packin' sociopathic statesmen While spending several stacks of scrilla from her Swiss savings account set up by a syndicate of Saudi servicemen Better be bold & brazen with ya broadcast ya brutish, brutal or brightly, brisk brilliant bars of blaspheme Brando, baby, was born blissful with bravado & breath-takin' blurbs like I baptized in bling Racist rabbis read riddles to rectify a righteous right-wing revolution to restore religious retribution Realistically this ridiculous like a redneck Republican practicing Ramadan & sippin' root beer as a resolution NOTE TO VOTERS: I meant to change the proposition to 1 verse 1 round, not 2. That's why I'm only able to post one verse. But still keep the "up to 16 bars". Seeker you can "write pass" or submit. If you-all count it against me, no harm, no foul. But keep your votes based mostly on Rule 4. Con Women whether whorin or wishfully worshipin' wit me on a whiptop Wreckin' it til it withers, wrestlin in weathers n' got a writ, the whistle-drop God's great in his grace gruesomely gracefully grantin' me graciousness Gods' gate are like grapes ghoulishly grievously grindin' false greatness Govs gape for grand glades gladsomely generously glidin' greedy grandness Rods rape in rages ruthlessly racially, rationally rantin' for me to reek repayments Ramrods rate rampages rudely ration-fee, recklessly, rampin to the replacements roughshods rake restages ruefully regularly relentlessly replantin retracements Baseless basements with bassin breakin' n' bakin beats because it's blatant Baseness of bracelets baskin' in breathtakin in backbreakin like it's bacon Basis for you to brace us, bashin brakin so stay blaking (1) we are as brazen Salacious in statements slammin Satan as i'm stakin all there is in the station Spacious in stations stammin not snakin (2) aint slatin in Gods spirit, it's salvation Sagacious like sages shamblin in slayton, i'm skatin' cuz ballin is the standardization Waitin's wastefulness washin wakin up til i am wastin' til the beast wakens 1. http://www.urbandictionary.com... 2. http://www.urbandictionary.com... |
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Vote Placed by RichardCypher 7 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: Con wasn't easier to understand than Pro, but the opposite. Seriously what is this="Seducin' slayers into sexually stringent slick n' sick superstitions
Systematically slappin' sorrows from surrealistic n' silly seditions
Significantly slammin' slangin' singin' n' sinnin, screamin' suppositions" vs this="Whimsical weather wrecked my weed-smokin' weekend so I wrote a war game wilder than the World of Warcraft
Wandering werewolf-witches welding witchcraft wage warfare with wayward Welsh warlocks on a warpath". Pro told a semi-story, Con rambled off rhyming words. Pro more entertaining because I understood where his rhymes were leading me. Con had good rhythm but not good clarity.
Vote Placed by bladerunner060 7 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: An entertaining read. Well done from both sides. This is a subjective debate, and I liked the sound of Con's better enough to award the points--but both sides did a fine job!
The basic principle of alliteration dictate a bar aka line bearing two or more consecutive words with the same beginning or ending letter. The final word does not have to have the same letter as it corresponding rhyme partner.
Ok:
go get some real rap skill silly broke busta
... ... .... .... .... .. ... ... ..... ..... .... hustla
I like white women with world class whoppers
... ... .... .... .... .. ... ... ..... ..... .... ... choppers
tell the trolls to stay away from this tenacious debate
or I'll slice 'em into serrated sections to show their fate
Not Ok:
typing regular lyrics with just two matching aligned alliterated rhymes
And thinking you created a valid flip that meets the proposed guidelines
I kill you with my legendary slick skill, Brando
You know I'm a legendary real rap king, bro
The safe bet is to fill each bar up with words bearing the same letters. If the bar is phonetically strong with alliterated words the end words don't have to rhyme. For ex:
Juice Judy just gave me a jolly jigglin' jigga blowjob
After Loosey Lucy let a sticky wet lick lash my prick
Explicit, yes. But the point is the bars are so powerful with phonetically rhyming content that it doesn't matter if they end with matching rhyme words.
This is likely the rhyming pattern you're talking about.
Consonance is a form of rapping that involve the end letters of a word having the same or similar pronunciation sound. It's rapping too: got gillion; ready...revival; what, when, whip, etc. These all rhyme through their beginning first syllable.
Alliteration pertains to words beginning with the same first or last letter.
This debate had expired and I decided to reinstate it. Notice none of the alleged "rap masters" will get near this debate. It's above their intellect.
Better be bright about being brilliant.
Gotdamn, I got gillions of gifted gabs to give!
Ready to rumble with Regime in a rap revival?
Shadow is skilled in syllabic syntax, sir.
What will you write when I whip out my whip-lashing wordology?
This is not a battle rap competition. It's a lyrical mastery competition. Which, since none of the so-called DDO rappers have stepped up to, is a testament to their lack of genuine lyrical skill.