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Skye2468
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flakypie
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Rap Battle

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flakypie
Voting Style: Open Point System: 7 Point
Started: 10/16/2018 Category: Music
Updated: 3 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 1,305 times Debate No: 118573
Debate Rounds (5)
Comments (12)
Votes (1)

 

Skye2468

Pro

I love writing poetry, And think this would be kind of fun. For the first round just say you accept or something, And then in round 2 we will start the battle.
flakypie

Con

Yaaassss queen! I except

There was another one of these I wanted to join but they put the requiem up too high. . .
I also like poetry, And am looking forward to busting my dope rhymes.

-please forgive my use of dope but I can't take it back now
Debate Round No. 1
Skye2468

Pro

Alright, This is round 1 and I'll keep it simple
Better watch out so you don't get popped like a pimple
So for the moment I will just apply the acne cream
So that way I don't lyrically destroy you this round, And maybe by next round you can be redeemed
In other words I'm saying I have no confidence in your rhyming abilities, Or anything you have to say
So I am putting my best efforts on delay
It's funny you even accepted this debate
You said you couldn't join the other one, You probably should of just accepted fate
But now that you are here, I get the pleasure of mentle subvert
If you get me to hyped I will bury you 12 feet, Not just 6 feet in the dirt
This is all I am typing now, So I hope your prepared
I am only going to lyrically demolish you, So please don't be scared
flakypie

Con

Sharpen your slang, You know nothing,
I see your cheap threats and I know that you're bluffing,
Typos? Will get you nowhere,
Your crybaby mouth is too scared to swear,
I'm not here to start throwing sh*t,
So act like a monkey and I can just quit,
Already know that I'm better than you,
I don't really need to see this through,
Give up, If you haven't already,
There's fear in your heart and it's still going steady,
Steady for you means easy for me so plead your plea,
No need to get heady,
Ready? For the words I unleash
There's no need to tell you to beware the beast
Your meter is off, Your grammar's a shame,
I'm three squares ahead and I'm winning the game
This battle's too easy a task
So wave your white flag and throw off your mask
So don't tell me you're holding back,
Just a clever ruse for a weak attack
Debate Round No. 2
Skye2468

Pro

You think you can rhyme better than me? Lets just see how much you can take
I'm about to drop a heavy load of rhymes on you so hard, It will pound you into the ground and cause an earthquake
You claim your better than me? For goodness sake
I'm about to make you fall so I better get a rake
Because it's about that season, So I better clean up before I leaves
"He really thinks he can win? " oh please, How can he unlock the lock if I am the one holding the keys?
Because to beat me you have to get past the first door
Me on the other hand well. . . . I have already busted down my first four
Have these puns gone over your head? Or am I just not making sense?
It doesn't matter, Ether way your just to dense, Or I'm to immense
I'm about to take my lyrical hammer and this rap battle and nail it
I'm going to be Eminem, While MGK is who you represent
I don't need to swear to beat you, And I certainly don't need that kind of sentence enhancer
You need them though, You don't have that talent and without them your raps would be a disaster
flakypie

Con

Do you really want me to blow you to ground zero?
You think by not swearing you can call yourself a hero,
Well tell you what, I can do that too,
Just one of many reasons that I'm better than you,
Your words are child's play, Prepare to get your mind blown,
You had none anyway, So come into my rhyme zone,
Your logic is mundane, A metaphor for keys and doors?
You're fighting with yourself, A couple tiny, Pointless, Wars,
Don't dare to try and fix you, 'cause you've already fallen apart,
In the case of your disjointed rapping, I'd have no idea where to start,
Don't bother catching up, I've already passed the finish line,
Your silly whining isn't good enough to waste my time.
You call them rhymes, But your lines don't even rhyme,
Your meter's off about half of the time
You're sitting there, Sad, Ugly face turning plum,
I'm chilling with my doggo and popping bubble gum
Debate Round No. 3
Skye2468

Pro

You know what? I don't really care if your a boy or a girl. You're probably just an it
It's about time I go for the jugular, And cause a throat slit
I don't call myself a hero, I am actually a villain
Because of all these evil acts I'm committing from these rhymes I keep killin
You don't like my disjointed rapping huh? Well isn't that a disgrace?
Here, Let snap my fingers back into place
You're right I don't have a brain, I didn't think you knew?
Funny thing is I don't need one to beat you
Your rhyme zone? It's all part of my universe
I am in control here, And I'm about to make it worse
You claim my logic is mundane
But my non existent mind can come up with more than anything you could come up with in your existent brain
Don't worry I won't try and fix me, I wouldn't even know where to start
Because my lyrics are so deadly they have even caused me to fall apart
You think you passed the finish line? It looks to me like your back at the start
Remember I am in control of this universe, You know, For someone who has a brain you're not very smart
Did you really complain about how my lines don't even rhyme?
When within the same line you just rhymed rhyme with time?
Oh and true I am sitting here sad, Because I thought I would have to use some effort
But I guess I am going to have dig you back up out of the dirt
I will admit I am pretty ugly though, I will atleast give you that
But not nearly as ugly as your rap
flakypie

Con

I don't really care if you call me it,
Looks like your meter's still a piece of sh*t
Rhymes that make you die do the world a service
Everybody knows that you got no purpose,
But for now can we tone it down,
'cause this battle's at an end
And it's over now,
You want respect then I will give you my support,
If you don't really want it then continue this retort,
But I don't really wanna fight anymore,
So put an end to the war,
And we'll settle the score,
I think for now I'd like to say congratulations,
And also criticize my frequent hesitations,
Don't rap rhymes that tear yourself apart,
Then you're back at the start,
Even if you're smart,
I'll give you credit for the rhymes you've spun,
But in my little world, Well, You would not have won,
And consequentially I say to each his own,
So I'll change my tone, Throw myself a bone,
This little universe is not one you've created,
It's where great lyricists have stood there and debated,
They're never sated, Always spewing hate,
And they can never abate,
Until they hesitate,
Wait! Haven't I made a contradiction,
But all of that is just my natural confliction,
Let's try to end it on a mellow note,

And please, For Christ's sake, Just let the readers vote
Debate Round No. 4
Skye2468

Pro

Wow, I guess you crumbled from the weight that my heavy rhymes weigh
Did you really just compliment me in a diss? Guess you really do represent MGK
Right now I am half asleep so I'll just finish you off with simple bars
Don't shoot for the moon because you wouldn't even make it among the stars
Darn, It seems you gave up before I could start multisyllable rhyming
It would of sped the process of you being dead, So you have really good wimp out timing
You know, I'm glad you didn't get me to start
It would of not only tore me, But also tore my own rhymes apart
Oh well, I guess i'll leave it at that
If this was tic tac toe, You don't even have a scratch
You're a dog, And I sent you to the pound
I bet you can't, But maybe you can make a comeback in this last round
flakypie

Con

And here I thought we were rolling in a patch of daisies,
If you really want to go and die and meet Hades,
I'd think that even simple scum like you could take it,
A sliver of hope to finally mark your deadly fate,
What makes you think that I gave up? Ever?
Coz' we all know that I was winning to the last letter,
I was offering you a kind of truce,
Or a last salute, To a petty dispute,
I was asking you to not be consumed by your rage
and surrender the stage, To the words on the page,
I gave you my respect, But only if you changed,
And didn't continue with this stupid charade,
Name one good rap that used the smae lines twice,
A stupid one at that, Well, Why am I surprised?
Your logic is flawed, You need to be dismembered,
A true and simple message from a bored contender
Debate Round No. 5
12 comments have been posted on this debate. Showing 1 through 10 records.
Posted by flakypie 3 years ago
flakypie
yups!
Posted by Skye2468 3 years ago
Skye2468
We should do this again sometime I had fun. No hard feelings lol. We should add each other as friends
Posted by Skye2468 3 years ago
Skye2468
lol
Posted by flakypie 3 years ago
flakypie
lol you're not ugly I just needed a space filler
Posted by flakypie 3 years ago
flakypie
I'm a girl tho. . .
Posted by flakypie 3 years ago
flakypie
I will win. . . With the power of corgis!
Posted by Skye2468 3 years ago
Skye2468
I'm burning alright because i'm on fire :P
Posted by Skye2468 3 years ago
Skye2468
lol
Posted by flakypie 3 years ago
flakypie
BUUUURN lol
Posted by Skye2468 3 years ago
Skye2468
lol The reason I said poetry is because in a way rap is poetry just to a beat
1 votes has been placed for this debate.
Vote Placed by dsjpk5 3 years ago
dsjpk5
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Reasons for voting decision: Con had better flow and wordplay.

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