Rap battle
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after 1 vote the winner is...
ShadowKingStudios
Voting Style: | Open | Point System: | 7 Point | ||
Started: | 7/10/2014 | Category: | Music | ||
Updated: | 7 years ago | Status: | Post Voting Period | ||
Viewed: | 2,182 times | Debate No: | 58800 |
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First round acceptance, no rules
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From lookin at your picture, you see yourself with 2 glocks, Tu Pac
While i rap so destructively, you get shot non-stop, a G is what you not! Shadowkingstudios? As if you have your own record label... Your name in and of itself is just a mere folklore, a fable Typical black man wit saggin' pants n' weed smokin' An end to your stereotype is what i'm dearly hopin! You look Martin Luther King bad with your whack tries Cuz everybody can see right through your lies You only wrap sandwiches, flip burgers n' pass fries Get out of my sight before another fool dies so say your prayer of fate i'ma end you like the undertaker Put a streak through your name, take your mom, dissect her To see what in the world brought you into this world Your words shall be used against you, leave you unfurled Your finished, diminished, leave your rap name whirled
Dear God what have we got here? Not another flawed fraud livin' a facade On this maraud, I hook ya like cod, terminate ya with my verbal firing squad Nevertheless, you lack lyrical finesse with that discombobulated mess you protest Blaspheme my noblesse, get bench pressed by my repress you 90 lb. princess Listen nut sac, you can't flow on wax, you lack the knack to audibly strategically rap Let's check the facts, I, your King, can stack a track with a lethal lyrical attack You'd sound like a duck quack, a whack piece of crap yackin' like a Tibetan yak You got jacked last bar by draw back, Round 3 will prevent you a bounce back You can't think with brain cells clogged with zinc, now out with the kitchen sink A kinky Black Chink who lip sync songs of N'Sync, Lickin' on Lance's hot link You an Al Sharpton, I'm a Malcolm, niggas like you I "X," to be smoked away like hash Dash gas on you & flame you to ash, sell you for cash to Mikal to be raped in the @$$ I spit bars on you like a llama, bend you like a comma, anal yo mama in porn-style drama Have her worship me like a Dalai Lama, and pledge allegiance to me as her Obama Round 3, you Geek I crank up the heat, compel you to Tweet this prophetic defeat That Rhetoric predicted offbeat that you will be forced to eat like raw diseased meat He said "default" meaning my fleshly presence is a divine essence of transcendence It is hindrance of my incandescence predestined to cause you to evanescence Truth so bold, I know that's cold your own debating mode won't allow you to claim the gold Don't blame me, bro, that's what the dice rolled, for me to be Prince, you to remain the toad Tupac? Nigga, they will compare you & me, to me being Jay-Z you being Memphis Bleek (who?) Maybe you can tag team against me with Lea Michele, then Glee me cause yo shitt is cheap At least she has a keen gleam with her sting, you have no zing in your batting swing Now bow down, kiss my royal ring, because your debate mistake have crowned me King draw back- "use a surgical instrument to hold open the edges of a wound" Lance Bass- Mikal- http://www.debate.org... |
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Noticed how con used "back" twice
You tryna too hard to roll the dice What are the chances that you'll beat me? Not 1, not 2, shoot, not even three is this how you disrespect the laws of physics? yap yap yappity yap running yo mouth like a gymnast I don't need a firing squad, I prefer to work alone cause when I'm by myself, you all in the danger zone forget doing a ranger wrong, I'm singing a deathly song I'll have you nailed to a cross everybody will say the king is gone forgive me Lord I didn't mean to commit blasphemy but using slant rhymes for me has become a masterpiece after you n your personality is disintegrated, you shall be integrated, your brain refrigerated on second thought, I shall throw it out to the crows so that it can be mutilated Click Clack clickety clack, get you whacked as you away from the pack let state facts, me versus you is like a cat chasing a hoodrat my belly gets fat from eating that, you stink from crack your brain is so wasted, God shouldn't a made it sick if I were you I'd use a stick shift and just wasted it so take the punishment that runneth in it psychic vs. psychotic and hypnotic will make this dude turn into a necrotic you listen to too much Chris Brown, so you go erotic, a porno you bought it ran our money to buy more, so now he Robbin it oh what a catastrophe,you get your songs from Rhapsody can't get past me, still recording your stuff using Audacity then when the truth hits, you be like I must rap, my dream has to be N*gga look like Soulja Boy, hang with me I'll leave you a broken toy ship you off to my enemies, trick them and win like the Battle of Troy this isn't a battle, this is a deploy of an evil choice on one of God's boys what in Gods name is wrong with your body structure? your scrawny little body can't take a rupture
Damn dude, not again with the kiddie lines[1], 3rd Grade rhymes: deadpan[2] like Ben Stein This time I'ma give you lessons of the eminent kind, like reading the mind of 3rd Eye Blind First, nigga, you must devoid emotion & emerge yourself in noun-based devotion Eliminate the flawed notion: that most voters will respect artistic self-promotion That's why I lost to that hoe Jew, you know who: "the femboy" you let spoon you every Noon Every Monday last June to ya'lls favorite Taylor Swift tunes, he had you barkin' at the Moon I'm only gonna ether you with 10 bars, I see by far you can't go toe-to-toe, so let's spar I scarred you last round to let you know you are, just a twinkle compared to this Alpha Centauri Star My Alma Mater is a PhD in Lyrical Slaughter, don't bother to retaliate, lest I grow hotter I issue orders like Godfathers, baptized in holy water. Nigga, daughter Adrianna[3] go harder (than you) 1- "yap yap yappity yap" & "Click Clack clickety clack" 2- http://en.wikipedia.org... 3- https://www.dropbox.com... |
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lol, you couldn't teach us better, so you used sources
Flows a lil off Shadow...you coulda taken better courses This dude just went soft like the Bernstein bears Note the resemblance to his pic, it got alot of shares Talkin' about my noun based devotion when i use verb notions to cut you like Moses split the ocean I just took your rhyme what a commotion, your skin's a lil too ashy, you need some more lotion This dude stole potions to create some more locomotions in his slogans n rap with no emotions You claim to issue orders from Godfathers, but there's only one I took my own orders, not commanded by the father, spirit, son Your about to get baptized again in the same water your daughter was in The color of your skin can never fully describe your deadliest sin I'm not an aggressive rapper, cuz it's not worth unleashin' my anger Look what i did now, fired thoughts like shots i ain't even a gangbanger I got many fiery fluent flows filled with flare, I fling at you feminine flea bags The first to flaunt fulgurous rapping fatality directly against you fruity f@gs The truth, TruthSeeker: They turn you off like a terrible TV show with trivial teenage vocabulary And tune in to me to be treated with terrific tales as they take a trip through the dictionary Yo pukish lyrical pattern & pace is pathetically pointless with powerless punch, please harken: Pray with ya pedophiliac Pentecostal priest for penance, perhaps then, I'll present you with pardon Ninny-@ss nigga, are you takin' notes? Notice how I nimbly nudge nouns into natural position Like a U.S. Navy Admiral navigatin' through nautical knots next to narcissistic Nazi attrition My alias, "The Tactician" tactically takin' you out with thermonuclear triple targeted commands Ya trichomania[1] teems you like a tricky tranny in tight tutus, I curse on you trichosis[2], man If you can cleverly climb over my crazy crafted rhymes continuously cutting you into carcass gore I'll cancel my calculated lyrics in challenges & cease my claim to rap competitions anymore Deciding votes must deems you Dominant Dude to force me to denounce my declared supremacy But the daffy dookie you spit is decadent, deficient of the dalliance I do through rhyming dichotomy Shadow is the Shady on this site, not you or any sucker can seriously slice me to Second Place Cause my slick skill in 16 bars surgical serrate you slow simpletons to simple disgrace 1-Trichomania - a passion for hair (http://dictionary.reference.com...) 2-Trichosis - Any diease of the hair (http://dictionary.reference.com...) "Lyrical Slaughter" ShadowKing aka Regime July 11th, 2014 |
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1 votes has been placed for this debate.
Vote Placed by bladerunner060 7 years ago
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Reasons for voting decision: I found Con's rap to have better "flow", albeit a bit more complicated one. As always, happy to clarify this RFD.
I got many fiery fluent flows filled with flare, I fling at you feminine flea bags
The first to flaunt fulgurous rapping fatality directly against you fruity f@gs
The truth, TruthSeeker: They turn you off like a terrible TV show with trivial teenage vocabulary
And tune in to me to be treated with terrific tales as they take a trip through the dictionary
I got many fiery fluent flows / filled with flare / I fling at you feminine flea bags
The first to flaunt / fulgurous rapping fatality / directly against you fruity f@gs
The truth, TruthSeeker: / They turn you off like a terrible TV show / with trivial teenage vocabulary
And tune in to me / to be treated with terrific tales / as they take a trip through the dictionary
Yes the first example is hard to vocally envision if you don't know sh!t about cadence. But as you can see the second establishes signaled pauses in order to reconcile rhythm. It is also a prime example why I denounced 20+ words in a bar I see from other debaters, esp. Mikal, because in vocal delivery--unless your Twista & Bone Thuggin' the song--you can't practically rap 2 bars that long in even breaths