The Instigator
9spaceking
Pro (for)
Winning
7 Points
The Contender
JaredFogle
Con (against)
Losing
0 Points

Two Rhyme Rap Battle

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9spaceking
Voting Style: Open Point System: Select Winner
Started: 5/1/2018 Category: Miscellaneous
Updated: 3 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
Viewed: 734 times Debate No: 113295
Debate Rounds (2)
Comments (4)
Votes (1)

 

9spaceking

Pro

Rules: This rap battle consists of only one round due to constraints of difficult rules. Round one is acceptance.

2,000 max characters. 20 lines max. Both of us can only have two matching rhymes before the end of each setence. For example, you can have:
A, A, A
B, B
A, A,
B, A

such as
school, lose, booze
raft, taft,
snooze
etc.

But you cannot have:
A, A
B, B,
C, C

go, pro, no,
run, bun,
change, range

We are allowed to not rhyme our lines at all (adding lines that don't rhyme)

If we violate these rules, the lines with extra rhyme(s) are simply ignored.
JaredFogle

Con

I....accept
Debate Round No. 1
9spaceking

Pro

No pain, no gain, that's what they say
Yet even just by looking at you, you're goin' insane
Don't even bother to pray, I won't be swayed
Every word I spit contaminates your brain

I thought competition would be difficult to maintain,
How mundane, you're just a trinket to adorn,
Your body's mine to obtain, habeus corpus,
if this was a trial we'd be already adjourned

I'm a thunderstorm, you're hardly a drop in the rain
You're gonna wish you weren't born, even your parents think you're lame
Like a bane, I make you torn, deliver you scorn
Bite you off like a cob on a corn

Your spirit I drain, you struggle in vain,
This is my domain, I can't be contained,
Kneel down fool, while I reign,
Oh, poor baby, did that give you a sprain?
JaredFogle

Con

Ay
Fonsi
DY
Oh
Oh no, oh no
Oh yeah
Diridiri, dirididi Daddy
Go
S", sabes que ya llevo un rato mir"ndote
Tengo que bailar contigo hoy (DY)
Vi que tu mirada ya estaba llam"ndome
Mu"strame el camino que yo voy (Oh)
T", t" eres el im"n y yo soy el metal
Me voy acercando y voy armando el plan
Solo con pensarlo se acelera el pulso (Oh yeah)
Ya, ya me est" gustando m"s de lo normal
Todos mis sentidos van pidiendo m"s
Esto hay que tomarlo sin ning"n apuro
Despacito
Quiero respirar tu cuello despacito
Deja que te diga cosas al o"do
Para que te acuerdes si no est"s conmigo
Despacito
Quiero desnudarte a besos despacito
Firmo en las paredes de tu laberinto
Y hacer de tu cuerpo todo un manuscrito (sube, sube, sube)
(Sube, sube)
Debate Round No. 2
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Posted by 9spaceking 3 years ago
9spaceking
My opponent has copied the lyrics to "despacito" instead of writing his own. Please vote me.
Posted by 9spaceking 3 years ago
9spaceking
yes, you can add lines that don't rhyme
Posted by NDECD1441 3 years ago
NDECD1441
I can barely get it.
Posted by tanner_1230 3 years ago
tanner_1230
Can you add lines that don't rhyme?
1 votes has been placed for this debate.
Vote Placed by dsjpk5 3 years ago
dsjpk5
9spacekingJaredFogle
Who won the debate:Vote Checkmark-
Reasons for voting decision: Pro had better flow and wordplay.

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