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Who can write a more depressing piece

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Started: 8/17/2018 Category: Arts
Updated: 3 years ago Status: Post Voting Period
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The words stick like a glue
As it sinks into my skin.
The assumption are dire but true,
Ravaging the conscience to begin.

Deranged is what becomes of my piece of mind
As the guilt inexorably attaches.
Bonded to one's pride - my dignity is left behind -
And my self-esteem is left with cuts and scratches.

As the cuts on my wrist turn into scars and dry
My mother stares at me in fear of what else i"ll do.
I don"t know how to fight off the monsters that are locked inside;
They"re right under the surface trying to break through.

Life seems insignificant, All sense of self-worth has died
And i"m merely hanging on by a thread.
Along with the people I know, My emotions are pushed aside,
To succumb to resentment, I"d rather be dead.


Down in the paddy fields
Surrounded by the Vietcong
We can find the biggest snake of all
His name is Thomas Yong

Or is he a dog?
Coz you are what you eat
Well I"d like to quote the great lachy mac
Who said "Tom"s streaks are his greatest feat"

He thinks he is hot
And gets girls into his bed
But they scream and run away
With one look of his head

The only thing he's achieved in life
Is two hundred and fifty insta likes
Guess what? No one cares
Go KYS your f*cking dyke!

Do two snakes make a right?
Coz Jason Jayas your only friend
The whole world would be much happier
If your life would end.
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thats not depressing i win
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